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ChloroformBoy — Salutations, Disaster, Kill Me
Published: 2010-06-26 19:53:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 2536; Favourites: 104; Downloads: 25
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hello,the world ends the day
you forget who you are
hello,
the world ended
with world war ii
hello,
the world will never end
as long as we're kissing
hello,
you've got armageddon
written all over your lips
(let me lick the catastrophe clean)
hello,
i don't believe in greetings
or apocalypses or eternity
hello,
in world war nineteen,
will you hold my hand?
hello,
you don't believe in propaganda
or conspiracies or happy endings
hello,
you don't believe in saying
GOODBYE
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Comments: 51
Just amazing. I don't know what else to say but that you're an incredible writer!
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I don't know what else to say but thank you !!!
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"hello,
you've got armageddon
written all over your lips
(let me lick the catastrophe clean)"
LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE.
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<3<3<3<3<3
tragedy-licker
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in world war nineteen,
will you hold my hand?
<33
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WORLD WAR BANANA
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hahaha.
would they call it the banana war or WWB ?
now that's the question. haha
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Hello.
I've missed reading your words.
And this is wonderful.
Great work. I love this.
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Hello 
also, i'm terribly behind D:
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Hewwo.
I'm peachy with a tint of mango in the mix.
What are you behind on?
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comments messages EVERYTHING D: lol
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awwww hehe. that's alright, life gets the best of allll of us most of the time. no worries.
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This is very clever, I like all the insinuations b/t the lines. Nice work!
Hope to read more from you soon!
-K
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i misread the comment hahah.
i thought you said hello without the o, blahlbhalblah, is the world with you.
and i was like, "wut? this is a happy piece. wtf."
and then i read it again and it made sense. (:
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you any other day i think your joy would be disgusting buuuuuuuuuut im very happy too!
i love the poem. and saying goodbye is hard.
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I love this <3
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ahh i wish i knew a better word than "thanks"..... but THANKS
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lovely. now are you ready to raid england of their hot british boys? remember; you got tall muscle-y, i got the shorter muscle-y.
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best thing about you: you write for you, and not for us, not for her, not for anyone else.
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One of the great things about poems from you is that every one comes with a witty comment.
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Oops- sorry for stating fact. [Enter amazed comment about your writing here]
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'hello,
the world ends the day
you forget who you are'
beautiful. i love this.
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you're welcome (:
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<3
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"hello,
you've got armageddon
written all over your lips
(let me lick the catastrophe clean)"
That has to be my favourite part of this poem; the repetition of 'hello' really makes it stronger. Yet another good piece of writing from you. (:
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I'm glad you're so happy.
Keep up the gorgeous-ness-ness you cute little ginger, you.
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It's nice.
Really.
Now, where did the joy come from?
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