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Chocban — The Invisibility Issue

Published: 2008-01-03 13:13:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 208; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description I hate being invisible
It's like you have died
The sum of friends matters not
Trust me I have tried

You be in the big crowd
And disappear one day
Yet not one of them notices
You have been away

I guess it takes a lot of time
Something everyone lacks
But even when I try I feel
I've slipped through the cracks

What I hate the most though
Is when you're finally seen
It's something you have done wrong
Or some place you have been

The major disadvantage
Is not walking through solid things
When people spit out nasty words
You take it though it stings

I do try however
To drift from group to group
I guess if they're the noodles
That'd make me the soup

Invisible I guess is not that bad
Cause when you do speak true
Most of those who yell and shout
Underestimate you

One day I'll be much stronger
And the real me will appear
But until then I must fade away
Taking action is what I fear
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Comments: 3

dragon-heart-girl [2008-12-11 12:34:19 +0000 UTC]

Deffinately the right choice to post this. It rang true for me and I'm glad you put it up. Well done

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Chocban In reply to dragon-heart-girl [2008-12-14 13:34:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Need to get the creative juices going again me thinks. Tis the rare comments that make being on here worthwhile

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dragon-heart-girl In reply to Chocban [2008-12-22 03:56:23 +0000 UTC]

I know the feeling I haven't been on here for ages

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