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Published: 2012-07-18 05:05:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 8101; Favourites: 200; Downloads: 31
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my name's red, a student at a wizard academyas a wizard, i literary suck. my grades are low, i keep messing up my spells, i always ended up blowing the class room when making potions. everyone in the academy hates me, always mock me like there's no tomorrow, except my 2 best friends, blue and green. sometimes, during free period i'd run to the forest near the academy to get some peace. there, i don't have to worry about anything. just listen to the songs of the forest, the rustle of the leaves and the calming breeze. all my worries are gone just by coming to that forest. and then one day, i met her. the forest fairy, guardian of the forest, the most beautiful girl i've ever seen
yellow
guess who just got her cpu for her pc back?~ i miss my mouse so much hueeeee why i didn't use it instead of a mouse pad on my laptop? because my moron of a brother hid the thing with the excuse "the mouse is only for the computer. use the mouse pad!" :T tho i still have to use the laptop a few times... but that's okay~ yaay~
okay, this little baby's for the specialshipping 4 years anniversary contest of
my otp has a day~~ do you know how happy i was when i know ss has a day? do you? do you? DO YOU????#SLAP
and now, i shall rant
wat is anatomy
wat is background
how do you fairy wings
how do you forest
how do you combee
how do you art
huaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
[EDIT] do swablus even live in forests...?
i wanted to make the forest looks like the one yasu did.. but after several failed attempted... screw this looks more like a jungle... i didn't do enough research hiks...
SOMEONE KILL ME OR AT LEAST AMPUTATE MY ARM IT BURNS LIKE HELL#SLAP
and now, if you'll excuse me i shall do one for pokeshipping, i ain't planning on being late this year woo~
red, yellow (c) pokespe, satoshi yamamoto, hidenori kusaka, mato
combee, oddish, swablu (c) pokemon, nintendo
grass blades, lace on yellow's dress, patterns on yellow's wings, red's magic glowy thingy (c) owner i do not remember cause there's too much brush on my folder
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(note: haha, first critique ever, I dunno what I'm doing)
Well, where to start?
The background is really nice, it brings to your mind a deep jungle or forest where the pokemon, and yellow of course, can live in peace without being disturbed by humans or other creatures, it's like a secret sanctuary for them. It's also worth nothing the detail you put into it, from the moss of the trees, the leaves in the vines and even those little mushrooms and dandelions. Maybe if you had colored the tree bark's lineart instead of leaving it black it would be even more realistic. The light and shadows are amazingly done as well.
The pokemon look great where they are, good for covering those big "blank" spaces, but also subtle enough as to not draw attention away from the central characters, you could have left the swablu out though, since it's bright colors clash a bit and I feel like with the other pokΓ©mon it was enough and maaaaybe it is "crowding" the pic (I mean, a pokΓ©mon in each corner may be too much). I must say I love those two combee, their faces are just totally adorable.
Now for the central characters themselves. Redβs hair may be a little too pointy up, but his bangs and the expression are very well-done, he looks really happy just enjoying her company, I get that heβs focusing in HER, admiring her or just being happy because she is. While Yellow seems more attracted/distracted by the magic glow, not really noticing his loving glance. Itβs like theyβre both thinking βhe/she is amazingβ at the same time.
Redβs clothes are simple but I really like them and their colors, in contrast, Yellowβs clothes are very natural-looking with the details and colors and, giving her a freedom vibe, I love how her dress and hair flows naturally the wings are amazing. I would like to mention too, that the anatomy in this one is so perfect, specially their legs. Last but not least, the magic glow is a nice secondary light source for you to play with and the little leaves dancing around are very cute.
Overall, the detail in this piece is superb, and it can perfectly give out the desired feelings to the viewer: happiness, calm and loveβ¦ Congrats on this one, itβs astounding.
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DUNDUNDUN
MegustariacriticaralgunavezperonoseXD
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akh i can't akh my heart i've lost all the abilities to can
thank you like THANK YOU so much for this, helps a lot and thanks for showing my flaws, i'll keep em in mind:3
the pokemons: oh it does? well, there goes the option of asking my brother for advice then, tho i didn't put a pokemon in each corner, only 3, the ones i thought was still empty=w=
bark lines: i wanted to earlier but ehe... real trees don't really have those so.... i'll do em next time=w=
red and yellow: oh, well actually i had the scene in my head him saying this to yellow "look! isn't it pretty?" and he was actually looking at the glowy thingy tho=w= it didn't look that way huh? aww well.. and his hair... now that ya mention it.... it really is to spiky... i'm so sorry... (tho not gonna fix things cause i'm too lazy )
again, thank you, thank you so very very much for that i can't even tell ya how that helps
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I hate giving critiqueeees ;w; I feel bad after pointing out mistakes BESIDES THIS IS MUCH MORE WONDER THAN WHAT I CAN DO ACK!
The pokemon: LOL I know, I'm just saying that the swablu is light blue and white and I can attract some attention , oddish is green, mix well with the BG and the combees are yellow, the look very nice, specially with the lights and all of that.
Red and Yellow: Oh idk, It was the feeling I got, like yellow is amazed by his magic and Red is amazed just by her personality, her smile, her company, just be her! still tho... everyone can get different feels from just one pic -w- no? spiky hair LOL ok (it would be veeery troublesome to fix it anyway, right? -w-)
;w;
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i need to know my mistakes to improve so why should you be sorry? it helpsXD
pokemon: hoooo color contras huh? gotcha=w=
red and yellow: dawww so much feeeelllsss#SLAP yeap=w=" pretty much that
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I feel bad for pointing out flaws, but it's ok if you take it nicely like that
Feeeeeels... feels in all ur pics...
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pfsh i'm actually glad you pointed them outXD
akh my heart they broke to tiny pieces of millions
wat
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(note: not very god with this)
The backround of this has a nice scent. It obviously states a deep forest where nature and the creatures can live in peace.
The shading you did really brought focus to the spell/light the character Red is doing with his wand. The light around it really brings in the magic scent in the painting.
Their exprssions are very detailed yet simple. The boy is obivously happy and relaxed where he is now, you can say he wears the face of bliss.
For the female, she is amazed by the magic he has performed for her, she is as well helping him with those leaves enjoying the site, she is clearly happy.
Their outfits are creative, showing off the open-minded level you have to imagination and creation. The details you put to her outfit, the vines and her wings.
How gravity works esprcially well with the dress and hair. The anatomy in this is as well completely outstanding
Further more, the bond you displayed between them, It's obvious the male character is having high romantic feelings for the girl as she enjoys the moment she is in now. I can tell a powerful love will soon bloom with these two.
Overall it was simply breathtaking, clear about how much effort and creation you set to this, and highly beautiful how you got the details, anatomy, outfits, expressions and shading all to blend and mix into a harmonic art work.
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oh my sweet stars in high heavens all the feels i have right now i can't even *cannot find anything decent to say*
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU *LOVES CIN 5EVER*
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LOLOLOLOLOLLOLOL
YOUR WELCOME DENIKA ;-; I GAVE IT MY ALL IN THE CRITIQUE LIKE I ALWAYS DO
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maybe i take this for a video (needs much forest and special xD)
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look ^.^
www.youtube.com/watch?v=9_Ooc4β¦
it's short and only with movie maker but ok~
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Could you, could you maybe continues the little icon thingy italisized shit? Please? PLEASE? That would be interesting:3
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//SHOT
Could you maybe turn that little italicized paragraph into an actual story?
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i have the inability to do so//shot
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QAQ
Okay.
Not really.
Whatever
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AWW it's so cute and heart-warming. ;w; β₯
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And how many do you plan to turn into commisions?
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you do know what commissions mean... right?
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Yeah. Sorry.
I just thought for a second that you shared about a dozen of them with friends.
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commissions are payed for._.
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*jumps intoΒ a pit and blows self up*
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Red you go to Hoggywarts?
//SHOT
No, but seriously, this is weird.
Heh heh...
This totally gives me an idea for a HP/PKMNSPECIAL crossover...
Heh heh heh...
//SHOT
ANYWAY!
THIS IS BEAUTIFUL! QAQ
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IDK HOGGWARTS I NEVER READ/WATCH HP DOES HE REALLY LOOK LIKE THAT OMGXD
owo
GO GO GO
THANK
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They look so cute! I love Yellow's wings and the pretty forest!
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look like Yellow evolves into an fary tiype
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or is she MEGA YELLOW.
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Wow this is AMAZING AND I <3 it. its so awesome!
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Nice!
Red's outfit reminds me of Harry Potter. Just saying.
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to everyone aparentlyXD
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The fact he's holding what appears to be a magic wand only increases the similarities.
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YEALUWS A FAEREEEEE!!! :U MAKE RED A NAKED DEMON *shot*
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