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Published: 2008-02-11 18:19:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 5147; Favourites: 67; Downloads: 32
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Yay finally^^*phew*Yeahhh not too proud of it but it was a rush job enough well because I havent been doing them and I want to get to the next scene soon^^ well Ive be practicing bgs but they still fail lol!X3 Is it followble?....is that a word?...nope...darnEnjoy!
wait.....RUA DON'T FALL OUT OF THAT PANEL!!!!*fwomp*..to late..
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Runepaw(c)
Comic in russian
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yes another literature crit::
"Their lies only death in waiting" 'Their' should be 'There' :]
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someone already corrected me on this I know I got most of these wrong but I dont want to correct them yet.
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WOAH
I've ever seen/heard of this comic but I love it!
I love Salach Oir.
He is completely awsome!
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omg. I love your comic so much.. its getting exciting now
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oh noes 
the story is gettin to be quite interesting especially with all the mystery around the runes
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holy crap, he passed out! That would scare me shizless if that happened to me friend o.o very intense story, I love it <3
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thanks^^ Yeah its happened to a few peeps I know before but its a scary feeling indeed to see someone like that
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YES! More sexy Salach eye candy. :3 Your expressions, muzzles and paws have always been great.
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ooh, suspense! I hate you xD
great job though, regardless of your opinion xD
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Love the first two Oisin panels <3 Great perspective work, and i always luff ur BGs <3
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FINALLY!! lol, just kidding
awesome job,
I want to know what that really big black dog is
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yay, finally a new page for me to translate! i like the perspective, in the second panel. could you make a tut on it?
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ya! a new page. This is awesome...wanna see next page 8DD
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Heh, I think this one is awesome, love the second pannel, and I see where Rua is falling out of the pannel >XD your backgrounds are awesome and I love that you're doing this in color X3
Salach: Quick! Get his seizure medication!
8D This is loooove. WOO! for 'nother page <333
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hehe if only there was medsXDthanks!
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Then maybe Mr. Shadow should stop picking on him 8D
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But then the story would have no plot and theyd end up in the pub everynight getting sloshed!XD
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Well hey! I'm up fer a pint! XD I suppose its good that he's a bully then, keeps them from becoming alcoholics 8D
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Yeah!*clinks the beer glasses*Oi!
Yeah he is technically the hero that means!SUPER ALCHOHOLICS ANONYMOUS WOLF! SAAW! lol saawwwwww.
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Haw haw, *gives him heroic medal* There's something for his troubles XD
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Huh, where does a character go when it falls of the panel? And if we see grammatical errors or typos, should we tell you?
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Hmm*ponders* into my lap probablyX3 Yeah go ahead tell meXD
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Annnd, I think the 'their' in 'their lies' actually should be 'there' unless I'm reading it wrong
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Lol aw man Im no good today!
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Haha, thats ok, the pretty pictures cover all that up
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Ok, so first panel, there should be a comma after 'I swear'. And I'm curious, what's 'leggn''? And fourth, and a period after 'Runepaw'. Then capitalize the 'their', and a comma after 'do not return home', and a semicolon after 'their lies'. You forgot a period after the last sentence. Aaand in the fourth, there should be an apostrophe after 'friends', since multiple friends own it. And unless what Mr. Shadow is saying in the fifth panel is supposed to be a poem, then the 'f's at the starts should be lower case. An' thas' it XD
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Oh and Leggn' is Salach Pronouncing "Legging it" which is an irish way of saying "We got the hell out of there!!!"XD Hmm maybe I should stick to global
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Nah, stick to Irish lingo, since he's an Irish poopy.
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....oh manXD Ze grammer Queen!lol Ill see what I can do thanksX3
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BOW DOWN TO MEEEE.
<----has always been a grammar Nazi
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Wow your just like my friend Aoife!8DYay!
<-----has always been grammar dislecksic(see cant even spell that!X3) She scalded me the other day because I spelt "then""neut" how the!? And then I spelt my friends name "Sllee" instead of "Ellen" oh well I'll cope somehow
*sits on the curb with a sign saying "I cant write grammer good give me fud"*
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...*cough*dyslexic* But it helps if you use Firefox as an internet server, it underlines typos like it does in word programs.
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so do we get to find out who it is that is talking to rune?
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awesome i cant wait. ^_^
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Your backgrounds look just fine! The characters are more important right now anyway, and they look wonderful. 
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