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Published: 2012-02-23 17:19:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 1822; Favourites: 47; Downloads: 17
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There is no "good" and "evil" side in this little story ( Act I "The Raid Victim" ) I'm making, just one idea and the other.Characters top to bottom:
Ethan Syrus
Entary Sivers
Malice Elynbrigge ( the girl far in the back )
Aileen Hachi Takiochi ( bottom left )
Trevor Goddard of Spearhead Clan ( the one with spear )
For more info - ask questions
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A4, 2B mech pencil, somewhere around 6-9 hours of work...
I'm not happy with some effects and handwork but overall...good drawing ( for my standards ).
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edit 22. III 2o12. :
-added 2 rows of woods behind and under Malice
-edited the sky; removed cloud and redrawn with finer ( less visible ) lines
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Comments: 29
Generally quite a nice composition and I really like the swirling effect around the archer. I think the female character in the bottom left corner unbalances the composition somewhat....If she was gone it would work a lot better. The dude spinning the fireball blends in with the background from his legs down because the values are the same which makes the forms a little confusing. The archer is definitely my favourite figure... a dynamic pose and you have some nice shading without using too much line, but his bow is way to big!
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Archery related stuff is somewhat easiest part for me so most I'm happy with most of the poses.
The problem with bleding with background is that I am very bad with close background ( the one that's now landscape, but very much in the same row as the object/character of interest ).When summer starts, I'll have some time to go into woods and study small bushes, trees, rocks, ground, something that is most common yet hardest for me.
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Trevor of Spearhead..... the one with the spear.....
ISEEWHATYOUDIDTHERE!
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hahah It's old name for his clan...When I come up with anything better, I will change it.
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E brate evo mene opet sam se vratio na ovu sliku da pogledam.
Pa samo nes da te priupitam
Jel ima neki tutoriali za takve crteze ili je to samo iskustvo?
posto vecina mojih crteza izgleda ko da je neki klinac crto
pa me interesuje kako da ih ucinim..uhh vise ozbiljnijim crtezima
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Evo ti jednostavan tutorial:
1) 12 sati crtanja dnevno ( MINIMALNO )
2) Knjige iz anatomije ( umetnicke a ne medicinske )
3) Vise gledaj mangu nego sto je citas
4) Concept art - [link] Gledaj i ako treba reprodukuj ( kopiraj ) radove ne bi li sebi urezao vestinu u glavu.
5) Makar malo crtaj ono sto vidis ( realizam )
Dalje od toga nema. Samo sedi i radi.
Evo ti primer sta se moze postici za 2 godine ako pratis ovih 5 stavki: [link] ====> [link]
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E hvala ti puno brate
Sad cu da se bacim na posao
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Oh, they all look fantabulous! You drew Aileen! Ah, I don't know how you made the shading work for you...whenever I try it looks like kindergarten scribbles
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Stop thinking about lines and start thinking about surfaces
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thanks :3 Which character you most like?
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Ethan. definitely.
EPIC POSE IN FIRE TIMEEEEE
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Hey Danilo, U SUCK!!!11
XD
jk jk
jako drugacije izgleda kad se skenira :S mogao si malo u photoshopu izbalansirati kontraste
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radio sam to...ali neide...cak sam i crtao malo digitalno po tome da bih popravio sve i svasta..
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This is epic in too many ways to count. I love everything.
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Ahhhhhhhh, okay here goes:
1. Love the overall layout of the characters.
2. Weapons = win
3. Poses = win
4. Shading = you are godly
5. Background is amaaaaaaazing, especially the ledge Malice is standing on and the clouds
6. Effectssss of Entary (his hands) and Ethan (at his feet)
7. Hands = epic
8. Expressions = awesome, they all look very confident
9. overall: It looks like it would be either a page break in a manga volume, or the cover. It's just that awesome.
10. Each number counts as ten times the actual number.
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I absolutely agree!
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1o. XD
thx for review :3 but I'm not so proud of Trevors left hand work...( the one in front/further away from him...)
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XDDD
You are welcome
That's true, but it doesn't look like a hard fix.
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Bro...this is amazing....I love the effects even more ^^how'd yeah do em?
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thanks...Ummmm it's long story...
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brate svaka ti dala vode iz bunara
ovo izgleda extra
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Hvala...scan je ispao malo los...ali se vidi sta je..
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Lepo,bogme!
Mala zamerka;Malice si treb'o malo da izostris,jer se previse stapa sa pozadinom...
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ma to je do skena...izgleda mnogo jasnije i ujednacenije na papiru...
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