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dantordjman — Straight lines 10

Published: 2009-10-02 17:07:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 1138; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 0
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Comments: 12

Naughtius [2009-10-03 07:18:03 +0000 UTC]

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Great use of lines, love the sepia toning. Most SF images are the usual variety.., Bay Bridge etc. Using the tramlines, roadway markings is a fresh approach and an added depth of perspective with the terrain. I mean, how many people actually stand in the middle of the street to get a shot.., not many; my point exactly. I know it's SF but I wouldn't know where exactly. Peeks the interest of the viewer, so to speak.

You could though, try a much lower angle. That would really give more impact from the lines you've intended and a more dramatic scene lead by those lines.

Good effort and well done.

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dantordjman In reply to Naughtius [2009-10-04 01:16:44 +0000 UTC]

Basically I was just walking around I saw the street going up and I was like "there's something to shoot here". And as you noticed, it kinda was tricky-brave-suicidal call it what you want, to stand in the middle of the street knowing that a car can come out at anytime.
I really am honored by your critique. I just browsed your gallery and I now watch it. Thanks very much for your kind words, and constructive critique it makes me getting better

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MonsterBrand [2010-10-20 00:45:59 +0000 UTC]

Wow this is an awesome photo!

The lines are very powerful and even though this is a still shot, the lines really do make it feel like I'm moving forward.
Nice work

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dantordjman In reply to MonsterBrand [2010-10-20 07:23:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks big time. Probably my fave of the whole serie

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Gertcars [2009-10-03 10:26:02 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic picture of San Francisco, it's intriguing, like that a lot.

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dantordjman In reply to Gertcars [2009-10-04 01:19:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks buddy

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JCapela [2009-10-03 09:49:03 +0000 UTC]

great work

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dantordjman In reply to JCapela [2009-10-04 01:18:08 +0000 UTC]

thanks a lot Jose

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georgenikon [2009-10-02 18:59:49 +0000 UTC]

no spherical aberrations, great
what glass did you use ?

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dantordjman In reply to georgenikon [2009-10-04 01:17:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot. Believe it or not, I used my 18-55 lens. Simple, versatile and it seemed to work great here

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HopeRocketQueen [2009-10-02 17:53:06 +0000 UTC]

It's a little bit confusing if you look too much at the photo XD but it's very nice wich city is it?

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dantordjman In reply to HopeRocketQueen [2009-10-02 18:17:08 +0000 UTC]

San Francisco

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