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Published: 2010-05-12 14:06:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 1121; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 22
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Description Hi,

a step forward with a tiny render

C&C appreciated

pak pak pak
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Comments: 15

TheCleverFox [2011-05-17 16:31:27 +0000 UTC]

I would agree with the comment that the camera should be pushed in just a bit more for better framing. Also, the texture on the wood might be just a bit too detailed for the render and it becomes distracting. You might just be able to shrink the actual texture too, when you have a very high res texture on a small surface, the program has a hard time deciding which pixels to render and you tend to get graniness. Also, try a soft cool backlight for the underside of things, if you're using photographic exposure (usually a default) it will give you some nice effects. Other than that it looks very good! Solid render.

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thandav [2011-05-13 02:30:29 +0000 UTC]

cool

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shtl [2011-05-09 14:16:38 +0000 UTC]

wé je sais c'est vieux mais quand même! Quelle lumière un truc de fou! On dirai trop du stop-mo! O_o

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daounin In reply to shtl [2011-05-10 10:35:33 +0000 UTC]

t'es mignon !! je l'aime bien aussi ... ça fait scred

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subedei [2010-05-13 06:29:51 +0000 UTC]

I love these ones

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daounin In reply to subedei [2010-05-19 18:15:35 +0000 UTC]

thanks !!! I need to improve it ...

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subedei In reply to daounin [2010-05-20 12:52:38 +0000 UTC]

not a bother

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miktroz [2010-05-12 21:25:16 +0000 UTC]

Salut!
Dur de faire son choix entre les deux versions, celle-là est plus aéré ça passe mieux mais on perd un peu en détail (un peu flou, anneau noyé dans la texture) et je ne vois pas comment le champignon s'incruste dans l'arbre (pas de bulbe) la jonction est un peu brutale je trouve.
En tout cas l'effet est réaliste (la mousse est vraiment top), ça s'annonce bien pour la suite!
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daounin In reply to miktroz [2010-05-13 20:03:46 +0000 UTC]

merci l'ami ... pour tes critiques ... j'en été là moi aussi au moment de poster cette image ... il faut que je travaille tout ça ...

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Togman-Studio [2010-05-12 17:01:21 +0000 UTC]

nice ambiance!

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daounin In reply to Togman-Studio [2010-05-13 20:00:58 +0000 UTC]

merci

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Butch007 [2010-05-12 15:32:58 +0000 UTC]

This is fantastically lush. The only critique that I have is that so far it looks like it will be very easy to loose the fact that the mushroom has a face don't know if it would fit the conceptualization of the scene, but having the face facing slightly more towards the camera could help push it a bit forward and separate it more within the environment.

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daounin In reply to Butch007 [2010-06-11 08:46:09 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the coment my friend

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JoKeR0720 [2010-05-12 14:11:17 +0000 UTC]

Lookin pretty good! Not much to say as far as critique goes...

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daounin In reply to JoKeR0720 [2010-05-13 20:00:43 +0000 UTC]

thanks my friend

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