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Published: 2011-11-09 00:56:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 366; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 4
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Description Last one for the night. :]

A pic for Swift's apprenticeship. He's alone in the forest on a hunting mission, waaay in the winter. You better watch out Swift... You may lose the prey if you aren't careful... or, your life....
(( By the way, yes, his tail is supposed to be abnormally long o-o ))


PERSONALLY, I think this is waaay crap. The effects are way unrealistic, the anatomy is way off, and everything is overall BLAH.

But! I would like to know what you think of the background- as in, the trees. I LOVE drawing wintery scenes, so... :3

PLEASE CRITIQUE GENTLY. <3
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Comments: 35

SelfProclaimedCobalt [2011-11-15 06:07:13 +0000 UTC]

Amazing!!

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Dawnneh In reply to SelfProclaimedCobalt [2011-11-15 06:08:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!!! ^^

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SelfProclaimedCobalt In reply to Dawnneh [2011-11-15 06:11:13 +0000 UTC]

np ^^

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TheFrozenNinjaz [2011-11-13 16:10:01 +0000 UTC]

I.Love.This! You really made the scenery and lighting work greatly

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Dawnneh In reply to TheFrozenNinjaz [2011-11-13 21:23:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! <3

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TheFrozenNinjaz In reply to Dawnneh [2011-11-14 16:57:58 +0000 UTC]

welcome~

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miaoutastique [2011-11-12 22:12:05 +0000 UTC]

I think this is a beautiful pic! <3
I love the shading, pose and expression~ You did really well one those
and the background is good too. But the tree in the front shouldn't be blurry or
at least not that blurry. Cause that's a bit confusing if Swift is further away and
not blurry but the trees further and closer is. If you know what I mean ^^

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Dawnneh In reply to miaoutastique [2011-11-12 22:51:14 +0000 UTC]

Ahhhh! Okay! When i edit it, I'll remember that! Thank you! ^^

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miaoutastique In reply to Dawnneh [2011-11-12 23:04:50 +0000 UTC]

my pleasure~ glad to help c:

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SilhouetteTheSly [2011-11-11 14:52:34 +0000 UTC]

Holy. Crap.
Automatic favorite.
This is amazing, are you kidding me?
Beautiful landscaping/background, whichever you prefer to call it, body, face, all good from where I'm sitting, the eyes are really captivating, the only issue I see is the tip of the tail, it looks a bit funky, kind of choppy and blocky whereas the rest of the picture seems really smooth and sleek, but that's really the only flaw that sticks out for me.

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Dawnneh In reply to SilhouetteTheSly [2011-11-11 16:58:50 +0000 UTC]

Awwwh, thank you! >w<
And thanks for the critique, too! I was never very happy with the tail- I may change it later >w<

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SilhouetteTheSly In reply to Dawnneh [2011-11-11 17:55:50 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome love <3

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NeekaNeko [2011-11-10 23:13:02 +0000 UTC]

This is really cool awesome (: Please, never stop DDDDDD

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Dawnneh In reply to NeekaNeko [2011-11-11 03:32:31 +0000 UTC]

djahdgas You are so nice >w👍: 0 ⏩: 1

NeekaNeko In reply to Dawnneh [2011-11-11 23:01:07 +0000 UTC]

LMAO ikr (;

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hanspaw [2011-11-09 22:50:16 +0000 UTC]

dawww i love this c:

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Dawnneh In reply to hanspaw [2011-11-09 23:21:56 +0000 UTC]

adjhsgafj Thank you ouo

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CrimsonHallows [2011-11-09 02:21:33 +0000 UTC]

I really like this, caught my attention immediatly ^.^ I think its really cool!

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Dawnneh In reply to CrimsonHallows [2011-11-09 02:26:44 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thanks!

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shinjuTHEpearl [2011-11-09 01:11:20 +0000 UTC]

wow...just wow.... this is amazing, you say your anatomy is way off but its way better than anything i could do....*in awe* its great, and your background and the effects are great, it looks scary and amazing. and trees are cute. luv the winterness of it all, cause i loves the winter. looks great three thumbs up :'D

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Dawnneh In reply to shinjuTHEpearl [2011-11-09 01:17:05 +0000 UTC]

Awww, thank you!!!! ^^ <3

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shinjuTHEpearl In reply to Dawnneh [2011-11-09 01:34:55 +0000 UTC]

haha welcome

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KibaWhiteWarrior [2011-11-09 01:03:20 +0000 UTC]

Personally I think it shows FANTASTIC style and texture. I give it a perfect rating :3 Also....first comment XD!

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Dawnneh In reply to KibaWhiteWarrior [2011-11-09 01:05:47 +0000 UTC]

<;D You are too kind!!! Thank you!

Also, second comment. I win

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KibaWhiteWarrior In reply to Dawnneh [2011-11-09 01:06:59 +0000 UTC]

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Dawnneh In reply to KibaWhiteWarrior [2011-11-09 01:08:19 +0000 UTC]

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KibaWhiteWarrior In reply to Dawnneh [2011-11-09 01:09:03 +0000 UTC]

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Dawnneh In reply to KibaWhiteWarrior [2011-11-09 01:10:31 +0000 UTC]

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KibaWhiteWarrior In reply to Dawnneh [2011-11-09 01:12:49 +0000 UTC]

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Dawnneh In reply to KibaWhiteWarrior [2011-11-09 01:16:07 +0000 UTC]

You win xDD







NOPE. Chuck Testa

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KibaWhiteWarrior In reply to Dawnneh [2011-11-09 01:17:20 +0000 UTC]

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Dawnneh In reply to KibaWhiteWarrior [2011-11-09 01:44:13 +0000 UTC]

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KibaWhiteWarrior In reply to Dawnneh [2011-11-09 01:46:27 +0000 UTC]

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Dawnneh In reply to KibaWhiteWarrior [2011-11-09 01:46:55 +0000 UTC]

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KibaWhiteWarrior In reply to Dawnneh [2011-11-09 01:50:11 +0000 UTC]

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