Comments: 43
AlexRaccoonGlider [2017-04-22 02:14:34 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
Heya Dan, meant to get onto the business of commenting and critiquing your works, so here I go here.
Vision) Right off the bat, I saw the original sketches for this drawing and now that it's all colored up, posed and whatnot, I could really see as an audience member viewing this how chill/relaxed everyone is. As if Frederick and Spencer stopped in their crusade against Danbuster's brother's conquest for global domination to have a spot of tea and cheese. Not to mention also seeing a gryphon drinking is a pretty nice touch here.
Originality) Well, it's tea time, how original can anybody be? Although as I type, I'm also having some iced peppermint tea myself so I could visualize myself joining in the group.
Technique) One thing that I've always enjoyed your works here is how clean the line works are and how clean the colors are in regards to each of the characters, between the shades of green with the Stilton and Frederick's outfit and Thoronraw's plummage, this came out very well done and I like the emotions you have here on each of them, Wally's smile alone is something worth it's weight in gold as he appears to be very satisfied to settle a conflict over a hot one! He alone is what made this picture stand out very well.
Overall Impact) Just like Wally's smile, I'm going to give this picture a 4 and a half out of 5 stars here! Not to mention I forgot to point out the use of perspective is very well done here as well, it shows how tall Spencer is as apposed to Wally and Thoronraw is just as big as Frederick here. Excellent job Dan! =3
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DCLeadboot In reply to UltraTheHedgetoaster [2017-09-24 17:32:05 +0000 UTC]
Heh, yup! Under normal circumstances, Frederick, Spencer, Wally and Thoronraw can get along just fine together. Danbuster too.
It's just that Retsubnad has always been obsessed with conquering the world, trying to "set things right" as he believes and gain love and respect... something he never had in his difficult past...
Snag is, as he's soon to learn from Danbuster and his friends, this would not result in the utopia he dreams of but would rather lead to a dark future where the strong prey on the weak and Retsy is hated and feared and possibly eventually backstabbed by those who would gain his trust for their own advancement or survival...
I had been wondering lately if I might end up with Retsy becoming a reformed antihero whose intentions are well meant even if his brother needs to help him fix his moral compass...
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AshleyWolf259 In reply to DCLeadboot [2017-04-03 11:55:51 +0000 UTC]
Ash: Cheers mate. *Takes out his Danger Mouse mug* =3
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AshleyWolf259 In reply to DCLeadboot [2017-04-03 17:15:48 +0000 UTC]
Ash: I'll be gentle. ^^
*Pets his head softly*
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AshleyWolf259 In reply to DCLeadboot [2017-04-03 18:42:39 +0000 UTC]
*Ash kneels to Spencer*
Ash: Sorry, didn't mean to get you so nervous... <=\
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DCLeadboot In reply to AshleyWolf259 [2017-04-03 19:21:31 +0000 UTC]
Spencer: Don't worry, it ain't nuffink pers'nal... I'm always nervous around new people...
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BruBadger [2017-03-31 00:30:47 +0000 UTC]
Seems they're certainly getting along rather well. ^^
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Phraggle [2017-03-30 23:31:03 +0000 UTC]
TEA!
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