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derpiihooves — A Beautiful Sonnet - page 5
Published: 2012-06-11 18:41:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 3252; Favourites: 60; Downloads: 91
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fifth page of ~RaptorSenior 's commission, a comic based on his fanfic "Paradise Lost". Find him on FimFic under the name Xelor!cover: [link]
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pony © Hasbro, art © *DerpiiHooves , "Paradise Lost" and all related writings © ~RaptorSenior
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Comments: 45
God, love the quote from Chaplain.
I'm reading this as soon as I get the chance.
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New FiMFic name!
If you would like to read the story this comic is based on, along with some of my other works, navigate to FiMFiction.net and search 'Xelor'
That's my new name there.
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thanks! The quote wasn't my idea though; credit goes to ~RaptorSenior for that one, the author of the story this comic is based on.
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ooh the pentinance stare... also this is how equestria was made XD
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wait which part the pentinance stare or how equestria was made... or was it both?
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both, I suppose. I had to look up the stare part, and it does bear an eerie resemblance.
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Believe it or not, that part in the story is the debut for another character, one that has a more defined purpose in later chapters. Ghost Rider was the farthest thing from my mind when I wrote that part. I just needed some foreshadowing.
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I know that quote...it was in an OfficialDJPON3 remix, the uhh...smooth dubstep remix, i think.
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WOW SOME GHOST RIDER STUFF RIGHT THERE.
Ok now with complements, i like the way this is going and you're updates so keep them coming plz plz :3
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In case people haven't deduced it yet, the spell Skyward used against Diamondback was called Zero. That's why he counted down.
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Charlie! Yes! His efforts are not futile, not when everyone remembers that speech.
I can't wait for this comic to get on eqd and explode with views!
This was really enjoyable. <3
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>comic on EQD
Based on their rules, I don't think it will be ready for submission until the last page. That's when the tie-ins with canon occur.
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I thought Paradise Lost was written by John Milton
And I think the quote is from [link] a great speech
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I'm pretty sure this fanfic just borrows the name from that.
And the quote. mind = blown right now, I didn't even know that.
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It is from that speech. I love Charlie Chaplin's speech, so quoting it was to show my appreciation.
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If this suddenly gets animated and still look in your style it will overshadow the original show
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Yes. Derpii's style and my writing. Together, we will form an excellent partnership that will overshadow the greatness of MLP
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What do you think, Derpii?
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Comics are one thing, animating would probably kill me. 
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Well, you wouldn't have to animate it.
Enough examples, and some people from /collab/ on Ponychan might be able to help.
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that's true. A gigantic project like that would be massively time-consuming but so worth it. Maybe in a few years.
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Yes, quite a long time until it happens
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Well that was... unexpected! Great ending! Or should I say nice intro! Gah this makes me wish you could just turn the WHOLE story into a manga! XD
Well I'm sold, where is the link to said story? Also internet is down for a few days while they fix things up. But whatever I just pre ordered the Galaxy S 3 xD (selling my Galaxy Nexus to my roomy) yay!
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new phone! huzzah!
this isn't actually the last page XD I'll be sure to say so when it's done.
but if you want to read the story, you can find it here.
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Oh I read the story half way. Soon as dinner is done I'll get back to it. Pretty interesting seeing it go from that to being chained up and stuck searching through his subconsciousness just to figure out how he ended up there.
On a cell now so didn't click on description. FYI the mobile DA site kinda blown. Decent but blows.
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The one you're reading is Uprising. This one is Paradise Lost.
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yeah, I've been to the mobile site. It's... passable. haha
At any rate I'm glad you find the story interesting.
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