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DevaPein — -Another night-

Published: 2010-10-30 20:13:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 913; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 7
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Description I have to warn you that this part is a fail.No really.
I'm really tired,it's 11PM and I didn't write stories in a long time.
And just imagine how hard it is to express everything you feel and want to say in foreign language.

Middle of the autumn,early in the morning.A small group of ravens were looking for something eatable near the maple trees while three urban meerkats were waiting behind the trees patiently.Vlad was keeping an eye on one raven.He looked like the weakest from the group and it seemed that his wing was broken.As the rest of the ravens were moving forward the young meerkat started to come closer.Nigel and Cheh were getting closer as well,but they didn’t seem to be concentrated.Sound of withered leaves has scared the ravens and just in the second they flapped they wings and flew up to the sky,making the leaves fly up as well.That distracted Nigel and Cheh from hunting,but Vlad was to concentrated on killing that stupid bird.He ran right into it and jumped on it’s back.He broke it’s other wing to make sure it won’t try to fly away.
-I could use a help here if you’re done day dreaming.-Vlad shouted at his father and uncle still biting ravens’ wing.It seemed like those two had enough time for smoking before hunting as their reaction was very slow.Vlad understood that waiting for help is just a waste of time,so he bit ravens’ neck and thrusted his claws into it’s chest.The bird was down.Vlad picked it up by the wing and took a look at Nigel and Cheh sleeping peacefully on the ground.That made him wonder why is he taking them on hunting in a first place.Soon all his family could enjoy their “breakfast”,except for Vlad.He still had to drag two alcoholics home so that they don’t get eaten by other animals.Sure,he could just leave them there so that there would be peace at home.But as the leader he just couldn’t do that.At home just as those two smelled food,without asking they just ate all that was left,leaving Vlad hungry.But the young meerkat never complained.He always told his mother that he had a snack outside so that she wouldn’t feel guilty.
-There’s always next day to hunt,there’s always next day..-He calmed himself down.The sun has set down and it was moons’ turn to shine.Vlad took his favorite place by the window and before he went to sleep he took a glance on the ruins of the city.Everytime he felt a big need to stop this disaster.The only problem was that he didn’t know how.For almost an year he was planning to leave his home to find a way to stop war.He had a feeling that there was someone or something behind this all,and all he wanted to do is to find out what is it.The only thing that made him stay everytime he was trying to leave was “What will happen to my family?”.He always worried about that.After a deep sigh he laid his head down and slowly closed his blue eyes.He had no idea what is going to happen tomorrow.

Art(c)*DevaPein
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Comments: 26

FlamingSpartanWolf [2010-11-02 04:47:20 +0000 UTC]

XD
I usually forget that english is your secondary language. You're just so good at it :3
I watch a youtube video once, and there was an Indian girl talking to a peice of tofu...
She said, "I go through all the trouble to learn this sill language, only to find out that you people don't even speak it correctly!"The tofu responded with, "I can has cheeseburger?"
Sorry, that was random...
I like that story :3 I should really get back into writing...

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DevaPein In reply to FlamingSpartanWolf [2010-11-02 15:08:52 +0000 UTC]

That's because I always watched american cartoons instead of soviet ones xD
Really random.
Maybe x)

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FlamingSpartanWolf In reply to DevaPein [2010-11-02 15:14:48 +0000 UTC]

XD American cartoons pwn.
I know...
I wroteded something D:

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DevaPein In reply to FlamingSpartanWolf [2010-11-02 15:16:41 +0000 UTC]

They sure do xD
What?:3

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FlamingSpartanWolf In reply to DevaPein [2010-11-02 15:18:54 +0000 UTC]

My favorite is Invader ZIm and Grim Adventures of yadda yadda...
A story D:

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DevaPein In reply to FlamingSpartanWolf [2010-11-02 15:19:36 +0000 UTC]

You know what my most favorite cartoon was..
Orly?

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FlamingSpartanWolf In reply to DevaPein [2010-11-02 15:23:02 +0000 UTC]

Edd Ed and Eddy
Yarly D:

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DevaPein In reply to FlamingSpartanWolf [2010-11-02 15:53:52 +0000 UTC]

Yesh.
Aww :3

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FlamingSpartanWolf In reply to DevaPein [2010-11-02 16:38:12 +0000 UTC]

You don't believe me?

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DevaPein In reply to FlamingSpartanWolf [2010-11-02 16:40:41 +0000 UTC]

Why?:U

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FlamingSpartanWolf In reply to DevaPein [2010-11-02 17:20:08 +0000 UTC]

Why what?

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DevaPein In reply to FlamingSpartanWolf [2010-11-02 17:20:44 +0000 UTC]

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FlamingSpartanWolf In reply to DevaPein [2010-11-02 17:22:56 +0000 UTC]

D:

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Padfoot7411 [2010-11-01 05:50:08 +0000 UTC]

Vlad....that story was amazing I mean I loved it. I could feel all his feelings esspically towards the end. I could see him killing the raven and just Know I enjoyed it and it was very good. The picture is amazing

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DevaPein In reply to Padfoot7411 [2010-11-01 07:06:01 +0000 UTC]

Aww that's nice,thanks :3

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Padfoot7411 In reply to DevaPein [2010-11-01 07:08:59 +0000 UTC]

Your very welcome

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ItachiXme [2010-10-31 01:30:28 +0000 UTC]

I thought the story was good a few grammer errors but thats always expected when you are writing in a lanuage your not used to

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DevaPein In reply to ItachiXme [2010-10-31 07:20:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks anyway :3

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ItachiXme In reply to DevaPein [2010-11-01 23:18:03 +0000 UTC]

NP =3

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Aariina [2010-10-30 20:23:00 +0000 UTC]

Zgadzam się: trudno nieraz przetłumaczyć to, co chcesz powiedzieć, na inny język tak, żeby to oddawało to, co chcesz przekazać :/ Prościej jest tłumaczyć z obcego na swój niż na odwrót (choć może nie zawsze).

A co do arta i historii, to bardzo mi się podobało :3

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DevaPein In reply to Aariina [2010-10-30 20:28:59 +0000 UTC]

Mogę napisać to samo na polskim,litewskim lub rosyjskim i w setki raz lepiej.Ale po angielsku jakoś wszystkio wychodzi bez emocji.

Dzięki :3

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Aariina In reply to DevaPein [2010-10-30 20:31:47 +0000 UTC]

Możliwe :3 Wiesz, nie próbowałam jeszcze pisać w tych językach x)

Proszę ^^

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DevaPein In reply to Aariina [2010-10-30 20:32:37 +0000 UTC]

Wo jak x)

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Daschino [2010-10-30 20:15:32 +0000 UTC]

zawsze jak patrzę na twoje arty i czytam podpisy sama nie wiem co mówić ... powiem tyle, cudo <3

ale jestem oryginalna XDD jak nie wiem.

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DevaPein In reply to Daschino [2010-10-30 20:17:47 +0000 UTC]

A wiesz jak przyjemnie czytać takie komentarze?:3

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Daschino In reply to DevaPein [2010-10-30 20:49:11 +0000 UTC]

nie tyle że wiem, ale powiedzmy że sobie wyobrażam ;3

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