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Devornine — Dreaming of You

Published: 2011-02-23 06:55:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 786; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 11
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Description Ina really misses Vegas! Vegas was a character in an old story I worked on with two friends in High School! It was the story which gave birth to my little Ina! The story wasn't that great, which is why I keep starting and cancelling the comic. I hope to flesh out the story, keep it from being too cliche... because I really want her in a comic damnit!!!

My second time using Manga Studio with color! I am working on improving!

Second in the new Ina series! Please let me know what you think! Comments are most welcome!!!
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Comments: 11

ImKyonYuu [2011-04-04 02:51:01 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


hello!
Well, the drawing itself is good

I love the pose and the look of the girl

but beware whith the drawing proportion, the head shape does not fit the rest

about the lineart, your line is very irregular, you would to draw the line quickly, practice freehand drawing to make things easier

try to make shadows more hard and consistent, gives a better effect nwn


manga studio while a good program, not made for illustration-like drawings
You can use the easy paint tool "sai" or illustudio to achieve a better result

well I hope something I have served as critical
bye ! n.n

metal.

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Devornine In reply to ImKyonYuu [2011-04-04 03:02:07 +0000 UTC]

while I agree with the written portion... the star rating is way unfair... I am insulted by 2 1/2 stars. I will not display this I am sorry. Your opinion is your right and it is my right to disagree.

Good luck.

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ImKyonYuu In reply to Devornine [2011-04-04 03:06:04 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry, but I think the writing is much more important than the stars, which in this case does not reflect my opinion about your drawing, because things like that I can not express with a simple star

namaste

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Mangaka-Yoshiaru [2011-03-22 08:46:32 +0000 UTC]

You used illuststudio?

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Devornine In reply to Mangaka-Yoshiaru [2011-03-22 08:51:14 +0000 UTC]

I used Manga Studio! My new favorite software!!

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Mangaka-Yoshiaru In reply to Devornine [2011-03-22 08:52:40 +0000 UTC]

Oh fun. I never thought of using Comic studio for illustrations. :/

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Devornine In reply to Mangaka-Yoshiaru [2011-03-22 08:55:35 +0000 UTC]

Yes it is pretty cool! Also thanks for the :+watch:

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Mangaka-Yoshiaru In reply to Devornine [2011-03-22 08:56:28 +0000 UTC]

I thought id give a few artists my support today. :3

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Sinner-XXI [2011-03-09 00:23:33 +0000 UTC]

So cute =3

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akiragi [2011-02-23 07:32:48 +0000 UTC]

Everything looks great! But...is it me or is that foot oddly shaped?

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Devornine In reply to akiragi [2011-02-23 13:51:53 +0000 UTC]

Yea it is a wee bit, I kinda suck at feet!

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