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ZoraShah [2016-02-12 18:33:04 +0000 UTC]
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Hiya, I understand that is this a commission, so some of the criticisms I made are in light of this e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="387" title=" (Wink)"/>
The characters are clearly designed well, lots of unique features, details and weapons. I also like the use of poses and expression in order to give some hints of character. The fanus bou's ears are a bit disjointed for me, so I would say with fanus characters, to be careful of how their features ineract with their hair (also clothes,etc.).
One thing I would like you to consider, with future commissions too, is how the piece works as a whole. Thinking of the show RWBY, there should be some compliment across colours for characters. For instance, Velevet in team CVFY had her battle colour changed from blue to brown to suit the group. It would be something to consider.
Overall, great, can't wait to see more!
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Kadrag In reply to ZoraShah [2016-02-13 13:05:35 +0000 UTC]
"One thing I would like you to consider, with future commissions too, is how the piece works as a whole. Thinking of the show RWBY, there should be some compliment across colours for characters. For instance, Velevet in team CVFY had her battle colour changed from blue to brown to suit the group. It would be something to consider."
While I do think that you have a point there. But given it was a comission for OC's it's not dishwashers job to compliment the colors across the team. If the person said "they've got these clothes in that color" then they've got these clothings with that color.
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grim-puppet-demon [2016-10-05 10:43:40 +0000 UTC]
what's their team name?
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Keiichi181 [2016-07-15 08:46:27 +0000 UTC]
That axe on the dark blue/black clothes guy. It looks like the axe from the white edition of black rock shooter
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AceTriad [2016-02-17 01:46:59 +0000 UTC]
Wait. That guy, far rightΒ with the axe. I think I've seen his weapon before:
www.youtube.com/watch?v=7odSzdβ¦
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NavigatorNavvi In reply to AceTriad [2016-02-21 19:45:41 +0000 UTC]
Yep that's the one, the creator gave permission to use it. I just realised I never gave credit so here ya go, the creator is a person named Chris Lee, their YouTube isΒ www.youtube.com/channel/UCUvrnβ¦
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ACGearmaker [2016-02-13 18:46:46 +0000 UTC]
Nice drawing, but the faded out color with the depth doesn't fit together. They're too close for that.
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ThoughtsandWonders [2016-02-13 07:18:17 +0000 UTC]
The red one looks like a male Ruby
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psychoman4 [2016-02-13 05:43:03 +0000 UTC]
really love your work. Especially the guitar one, so awesome.
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CommanderFlynn [2016-02-13 01:03:04 +0000 UTC]
Not to self: Jump on the commission bandwagon when they open...
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SibArtsmen [2016-02-12 21:52:15 +0000 UTC]
Ah hell with it, next time you have commissions open I'm asking you to draw my team.
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AielloA [2016-02-12 21:48:18 +0000 UTC]
I really, really wish I could afford a commission of my OCs. Your work is amazing.
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CrawlerEnder935 [2016-02-12 20:40:27 +0000 UTC]
Amazing work as always!
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gamerguy1313 [2016-02-12 18:32:10 +0000 UTC]
Are these RWBY OCs?
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TheAmericanGamer In reply to gamerguy1313 [2016-02-12 19:02:37 +0000 UTC]
obviously, theyve got the rwby-esc weapons, a team of four, and a faunus on the left
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gamerguy1313 In reply to TheAmericanGamer [2016-02-12 19:22:25 +0000 UTC]
The third one is also a faunus. My point was that I didn't know if they were made to be RWBY OCs, or if they were just other OCs put into this style.
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warnett [2016-02-12 16:59:01 +0000 UTC]
Awesome!
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JohnnyRoast [2016-02-12 16:13:48 +0000 UTC]
Your artwork continues to astound.Β I'd request a commission for myself, as I can't draw worth a flip at the moment, but the characters in my head I've been working on for over a year still don't even have a costume design! I've been working to much on their backstory.
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FH47 [2016-02-12 16:05:13 +0000 UTC]
Loving that axe weapon
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FantasyRebirth96 [2016-02-12 15:57:11 +0000 UTC]
i like the bloo one's attitude XD nicely done on this!
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