Threns-Sanity [2011-11-06 04:07:23 +0000 UTC]
Holy shit you should have seen my face when I read the first paragraph. XD Okay. Pointing things out now.
I believe you already used something similar to "with the air of someone examining their fingernails" as a description before. Which isn't really the problem, mostly that they're so close together in the story. I actually really like the line itself, though. Great description for voice.
I kinda want to see this made in to an animation. Some of the things I'm picturing are really vivid.
I NOW IMPLORE FOR A COMIC.
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