Comments: 47
Nezdragon [2009-12-05 06:10:07 +0000 UTC]
Oh, wow, I love how you did the feathers. And the birds. And the anatomy. And... heck, it all looks awesome.
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Zairanee [2009-11-25 20:16:28 +0000 UTC]
Eww, nejdou ty křdla moc malá? Alespoň ,,plošně" ? Možná by toho draka neunesla O.o
Jinak se klaním, moc pěkná anatomie a nádherný lineart a... prostě jako vždy :3 Hodně se mi líbí ta hlavička :3
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Rastaban26 [2009-11-16 12:29:45 +0000 UTC]
This looks very nice. I only don't like the wings much. In my opinion the wings looks a little odd. The left wing is imo somehow flat. About the right wing... well it looks lovely where it attaches the dragon's body but I think that the end of that wing is a little out of perspective. And please don't understand me wrong. I have no idea how to draw wings... I only write what I feel while watching your drawing. Nevertheless, I think that the drawing is really nice and I can't wait to see it finished. Would it be a traditional or digital art?
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Getsugaryuu [2009-11-15 18:40:12 +0000 UTC]
Pretty good lineart^^ I like it.
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Skythe-Soulblade [2009-11-15 17:18:15 +0000 UTC]
I think I will save my actual comments when it is complete.
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greendragon22 [2009-11-15 16:19:05 +0000 UTC]
The feathers look really good.
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akelataka [2009-11-15 16:11:58 +0000 UTC]
The pose of the dragon doesn't really fit into a realistic scene because it's symbolic and unreal - it ignores the dragon's weight and physical laws. Not only because of the head rotated backwards or the tail, but also because of the neck jewelry. Why does it "fall in front", when the dragon, supposedly, is flying forward? This way it looks like the whole dragon is dragged by a mysterious power held in the jewelry ^^ Or like the dragon is levitating, not flying. I don't know if that was an intention, though.
If the scene was meant like a dream of the dragon, than it is absolutely ok It looks very dreamy.
The anatomy is great. The wings are a bit "weird", but that's only because they are fantastic and because such wings do not exist in creatures we know. They wouldn't be functional as well, but who cares about that on a picture? Overall, I do like the picture and I am looking forward to seeing it finished.
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Dragarta In reply to akelataka [2009-12-08 10:24:22 +0000 UTC]
Tak ja to vemu cesky Realisticka scena by vypadala jinak, ale to pujde asi lepe videt az po vybarveni copicy. Bude to fantaskni celek, ktery si nehraje na zadne ucebnicove korektnosti. Slo by z toho samozrejme udelat ilustraci do knizky, jak presne vypada a leta drak, ale to nebylo zamerem ani mym ani Silkarinym. Kdybych se plne soustredis na veskerou funkcnost, muze ti uniknout to ostatni. Obrazek bude sice po vsech strankach korektni, ale nebude v nem uz nic z tebe, nic co by divaka oslovilo. Tim rozhodne nerikam, ze me obrazky to maji, jen poukazuji na to, jakym smerem se ubira tvuj komentar. Nebo spis muj pocit z nej
Co vidim zcela zretelne jako chybne jsou ty kridla, hlavne peri. Ptaci ho maji podstatne lepsi, ale at jsem to predelavala jak jsem chtela, vzdycky z toho byl podobny paskvil Chce to nejdriv natrenovat na nejakem jednodussim pohledu zespoda a vubec porozumet skladbe peri. Urcite bych se to chtela naucit, takze si znacim do todo listu
Dalsi chyba je smerovani privesku jak rikas. Toho jsem si vsimla bohuzel az pri obtahovani lineartu. Puvodnim zamerem byla lepsi viditelnost, avsak doslo to az na ukor tehle chyby.
Kazdopadne diky za cas venovany do tohoto komentare. Bohuzel jsem driv nemela cas lepe se k nemu vyjadrit
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ObloquyCondemed [2009-11-15 15:41:08 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful work, I particularly love the tops of the trees and the birds. The only qualm I have is that there is a big difference between the dragon's bird-like wings and the actual wings of the birds. But I adore the muscle lines on the tail, they've been done so very well.
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Dragarta In reply to ObloquyCondemed [2009-12-01 11:02:09 +0000 UTC]
Oh You´re so right! I like those wings of ravens much more. Wish I could draw better feathers for such a big dragon...
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JoeltheSwedishDragon [2009-11-15 12:50:33 +0000 UTC]
As I often say, Don´t rush, take the time it needs. <] Really sweet done this is. 👍: 0 ⏩: 1
waterdragonrain [2009-11-15 11:26:44 +0000 UTC]
Is it possible to fall in love with lineart? lol.
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Elsdrake [2009-11-15 10:44:27 +0000 UTC]
its becoming excellent.
keep up the good work.
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AquaEden [2009-11-15 10:43:38 +0000 UTC]
Pretty :3
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