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Dragarta — Silkara lineart by-nc-nd

Published: 2009-11-15 10:25:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 1675; Favourites: 58; Downloads: 44
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Description Lineart of commission for *SilkenWinds . Progress is very slow, don´t have the time : (

Copic multiliners on bristol
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Comments: 47

Nezdragon [2009-12-05 06:10:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh, wow, I love how you did the feathers. And the birds. And the anatomy. And... heck, it all looks awesome.

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Dragarta In reply to Nezdragon [2009-12-11 15:11:57 +0000 UTC]

Really? I don´t like those wings with feathers

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Nezdragon In reply to Dragarta [2009-12-12 22:22:53 +0000 UTC]

Either way, the feathers still look good!

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Zairanee [2009-11-25 20:16:28 +0000 UTC]

Eww, nejdou ty křdla moc malá? Alespoň ,,plošně" ? Možná by toho draka neunesla O.o
Jinak se klaním, moc pěkná anatomie a nádherný lineart a... prostě jako vždy :3 Hodně se mi líbí ta hlavička :3

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Dragarta In reply to Zairanee [2009-12-20 16:58:49 +0000 UTC]

Jsou hodne uzka, plosne by to mozna dohnala na delce, ale vim co myslis Bohuzel uz s tim nic nenadelam..

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skullsmasher999 [2009-11-21 22:55:19 +0000 UTC]

very nice

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MetalDragoness [2009-11-16 22:13:47 +0000 UTC]

Mam na tebe dotaz ohledne lineartu pouzivas na to vic fix o ruznych tloustkach, nebo to zvladas jednou a jenom ruzne tlacis?

Ja jen, ze porad nemuzu prijit na kloub tomu, jak se da udelat takovej hezkej lineart

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Dragarta In reply to MetalDragoness [2009-12-01 17:53:03 +0000 UTC]

Jaj, sry za pozdni odpoved, nejak nemam cas to tady cistit : x

Mam asi pet ruznych tloustek fixu, vetsinou na lineart pouziju tak 2-3 . O tlaceni to urcite neni, to uz si spis misty pomuzu tim, ze tenci fixou caru objedu dvakrat

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MetalDragoness In reply to Dragarta [2009-12-08 20:33:22 +0000 UTC]

a jaky fixky presne pouzivas a jakou tloustku?

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Dragarta In reply to MetalDragoness [2009-12-09 14:30:11 +0000 UTC]

No ja mam Copic multilinery, 0,05 0,1 0,2 0,3 a stetcovy hrot. Ale ty fixky co jsi mi kdysi ukazovala budou myslim fungovat dost podobne Ja mam znacku copic aby se ty linky nerozpijely kdyz se to vybarvuje copicama.

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Rastaban26 [2009-11-16 12:29:45 +0000 UTC]

This looks very nice. I only don't like the wings much. In my opinion the wings looks a little odd. The left wing is imo somehow flat. About the right wing... well it looks lovely where it attaches the dragon's body but I think that the end of that wing is a little out of perspective. And please don't understand me wrong. I have no idea how to draw wings... I only write what I feel while watching your drawing. Nevertheless, I think that the drawing is really nice and I can't wait to see it finished. Would it be a traditional or digital art?

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Dragarta In reply to Rastaban26 [2009-12-08 10:33:49 +0000 UTC]

Oh I know those wings are bad. I like raven´s birds more, just wasn´t able to draw them similar for Dragoness. Still can´t draw feathered wings...

Traditional, coloured with Copics

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BlueRavenfire [2009-11-15 23:14:01 +0000 UTC]

nice work

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Graeth-Raltharn [2009-11-15 19:27:10 +0000 UTC]

beautiful work.

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blackrrose2 [2009-11-15 19:22:40 +0000 UTC]

wow its so beautiful

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Dragarta In reply to blackrrose2 [2009-12-01 11:03:04 +0000 UTC]

Thx!

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blackrrose2 In reply to Dragarta [2009-12-02 19:46:41 +0000 UTC]

welcome.

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Getsugaryuu [2009-11-15 18:40:12 +0000 UTC]

Pretty good lineart^^ I like it.

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Dragarta In reply to Getsugaryuu [2009-12-01 11:00:11 +0000 UTC]

Thx!

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Rackiera [2009-11-15 17:43:47 +0000 UTC]

nice. ed anyways.

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Dragarta In reply to Rackiera [2009-12-01 10:59:52 +0000 UTC]

Thankie!

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Rackiera In reply to Dragarta [2009-12-01 22:01:52 +0000 UTC]

your welcome.

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Skythe-Soulblade [2009-11-15 17:18:15 +0000 UTC]

I think I will save my actual comments when it is complete.

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greendragon22 [2009-11-15 16:19:05 +0000 UTC]

The feathers look really good.

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Dragarta In reply to greendragon22 [2009-12-01 10:59:27 +0000 UTC]

Glad you think so, I don´t XD

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akelataka [2009-11-15 16:11:58 +0000 UTC]

The pose of the dragon doesn't really fit into a realistic scene because it's symbolic and unreal - it ignores the dragon's weight and physical laws. Not only because of the head rotated backwards or the tail, but also because of the neck jewelry. Why does it "fall in front", when the dragon, supposedly, is flying forward? This way it looks like the whole dragon is dragged by a mysterious power held in the jewelry ^^ Or like the dragon is levitating, not flying. I don't know if that was an intention, though.

If the scene was meant like a dream of the dragon, than it is absolutely ok It looks very dreamy.

The anatomy is great. The wings are a bit "weird", but that's only because they are fantastic and because such wings do not exist in creatures we know. They wouldn't be functional as well, but who cares about that on a picture? Overall, I do like the picture and I am looking forward to seeing it finished.

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Dragarta In reply to akelataka [2009-12-08 10:24:22 +0000 UTC]

Tak ja to vemu cesky Realisticka scena by vypadala jinak, ale to pujde asi lepe videt az po vybarveni copicy. Bude to fantaskni celek, ktery si nehraje na zadne ucebnicove korektnosti. Slo by z toho samozrejme udelat ilustraci do knizky, jak presne vypada a leta drak, ale to nebylo zamerem ani mym ani Silkarinym. Kdybych se plne soustredis na veskerou funkcnost, muze ti uniknout to ostatni. Obrazek bude sice po vsech strankach korektni, ale nebude v nem uz nic z tebe, nic co by divaka oslovilo. Tim rozhodne nerikam, ze me obrazky to maji, jen poukazuji na to, jakym smerem se ubira tvuj komentar. Nebo spis muj pocit z nej

Co vidim zcela zretelne jako chybne jsou ty kridla, hlavne peri. Ptaci ho maji podstatne lepsi, ale at jsem to predelavala jak jsem chtela, vzdycky z toho byl podobny paskvil Chce to nejdriv natrenovat na nejakem jednodussim pohledu zespoda a vubec porozumet skladbe peri. Urcite bych se to chtela naucit, takze si znacim do todo listu

Dalsi chyba je smerovani privesku jak rikas. Toho jsem si vsimla bohuzel az pri obtahovani lineartu. Puvodnim zamerem byla lepsi viditelnost, avsak doslo to az na ukor tehle chyby.

Kazdopadne diky za cas venovany do tohoto komentare. Bohuzel jsem driv nemela cas lepe se k nemu vyjadrit

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akelataka In reply to Dragarta [2009-12-09 08:42:57 +0000 UTC]

Co se týče těch křídel, tak mi přijde spíš že nesedí tvarově (příliš úzká a protáhlá. Peří je v pořádku. Tedy, jako ptačí peří nevypadá, ale vypadá jako kombinace peří a šupiny - což mně osobně u draka přijde ideální. Takže i pokud to nebyl tvůj záměr, vypadá to dobře!

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Dragarta In reply to akelataka [2009-12-20 16:52:30 +0000 UTC]

Jj to uz tady taky nekdo zminoval. Ale peri je stejne blbe

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ObloquyCondemed [2009-11-15 15:41:08 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful work, I particularly love the tops of the trees and the birds. The only qualm I have is that there is a big difference between the dragon's bird-like wings and the actual wings of the birds. But I adore the muscle lines on the tail, they've been done so very well.

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Dragarta In reply to ObloquyCondemed [2009-12-01 11:02:09 +0000 UTC]

Oh You´re so right! I like those wings of ravens much more. Wish I could draw better feathers for such a big dragon...

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SilkenWinds [2009-11-15 13:59:51 +0000 UTC]



It just gets prettier and prettier!

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Dragarta In reply to SilkenWinds [2009-12-01 10:58:52 +0000 UTC]

Cool

Note me when you want to pay another part of it so I can start colouring it

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SilkenWinds In reply to Dragarta [2009-12-01 15:49:19 +0000 UTC]

eep! I get paid on the 4th (I think that's Friday) I shall send you another payment then! Sorry for that delay

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Dragarta In reply to SilkenWinds [2009-12-01 17:50:59 +0000 UTC]

Oh no prob at all! It´s just up to you I still don´t have much time for art :/ But I´ll try to finish it before Christmas!

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SilkenWinds In reply to Dragarta [2009-12-01 19:59:50 +0000 UTC]

Okie dokie!

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JoeltheSwedishDragon [2009-11-15 12:50:33 +0000 UTC]

As I often say, Don´t rush, take the time it needs. <] Really sweet done this is. 👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Dragarta In reply to JoeltheSwedishDragon [2009-12-01 10:59:09 +0000 UTC]

Thankiee

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JoeltheSwedishDragon In reply to Dragarta [2009-12-01 15:34:50 +0000 UTC]

Welcomies. ^^

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Katakana1 [2009-11-15 11:31:25 +0000 UTC]

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waterdragonrain [2009-11-15 11:26:44 +0000 UTC]

Is it possible to fall in love with lineart? lol.

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Dragarta In reply to waterdragonrain [2009-12-01 10:56:44 +0000 UTC]

Lol itt happens to me too XD

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persian-pirate [2009-11-15 11:18:27 +0000 UTC]

nádherná práce na křídlech..

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Dragarta In reply to persian-pirate [2009-12-01 10:56:20 +0000 UTC]

A me se prave ty kridla nelibi

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Elsdrake [2009-11-15 10:44:27 +0000 UTC]

its becoming excellent.

keep up the good work.

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Dragarta In reply to Elsdrake [2009-12-01 10:56:02 +0000 UTC]

Thx!

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AquaEden [2009-11-15 10:43:38 +0000 UTC]

Pretty :3

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