KiaraTheSandWing [2018-03-04 10:23:19 +0000 UTC]
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Well, this piece is quite great, the colors are great, the facial expression too, but here, a few tips to make you improve:
- Try to make the dragon´s body a little longer, that way, legs wont look as joint as they are (I recommend making it about three times the sze of the head, and then adding the back legs)
-The wings shouldn´t be a prolongation of the arms, try to make them a little backwards and add a shoulder to them (more or less like a bat)
-As for the feet and hands go, try to refference the hands from a human (if you want them to look humanoid ) or from a real animal (cats and dogs are really recommended for that) the feet sould be a little longer too, (like a cat, so that way, the dragon will be able to stand up)
-As far as the head goes, try to make it a little smaller, so that way, the dragon will be a litlle more proportionate
-Remember to look at real animals/other people´s work to understand how anatomy works (and make it fitting your style! There´s no need to change style, anatomy and style are compatible!)
I hope these tips helped you <3
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