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DSShadowPyro — Hold me close... [NSFW]
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Published: 2014-10-15 14:13:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 319; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description Wake up hold me close
Smother me suffocate me
A tender jolt as you touch my hand
Run you fingers down my side
Feel your smile
As you kiss my neck
Hold me close walk with me
Inhale your being exhale my love
A sweet rush as you rub my arm
Run your fingers down my spine
Feel your smile
As you kiss my neck
Lay with me hold me close
Hold my breath feel you breathe
Kinetic rush as you grasp my hand
Run your fingers down my chest
Feel you smile
As you kiss my neck
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Comments: 4

lostinmyworld [2014-10-18 11:02:56 +0000 UTC]

One of my favourites of yours. Very cute. I'd maybe break up paragraphs after "neck", simply for the flow and the aesthetics.

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DSShadowPyro In reply to lostinmyworld [2014-10-18 11:20:18 +0000 UTC]

I decided to keep it as one as ai tend to break up a lot of my poems in such a manner, thought I'd go for a dif look.

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lostinmyworld In reply to DSShadowPyro [2014-10-18 11:48:35 +0000 UTC]

Fair enough. Doesn't change the fact that it's a good poem anyway.

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DSShadowPyro In reply to lostinmyworld [2014-10-18 16:35:27 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you. 😁

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