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Dzonatan — Shadowgurl96's request
Published: 2009-11-05 09:02:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 573; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 6
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Request for . She wanted a cat girl with a sword so here she have it.Related content
Comments: 35
Nice one, good line-art + pose, although the pic could use some shading
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thats good i have nothing bad to say about this ^^
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I see...
its great, but i think u should expand ur technique and use other colors aside from black and withe
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Nice, nice; how about some color? I think she'd look better with some skin tone and some iris color. Give her pupils and a tail, too! I like the sword; maybe you can make it wider?
Overall, it's a pretty good pic!
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Very awesome. ♥
Is it just me, or is one arm longer than the other...?
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Nice job! I love her outfit and the sword!
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Looks very nice.
I love her expression. Good job, love.
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You're very welcome, my friend.
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I like the balance you gave her holding the sword. Though, you should really pay attention to the weight. The shoulder should be lowered by the sword's weight. Nice work on the toning as well.
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Really? I think it looks fine but now that I look at it her shoulders should be pulled down a little, or the shoulder armor piece should look more then just a piece of cloths on her shoulders.
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I apologize for the criticism but that was the only thing that bothered me. The rest is very good, and your lines are powerful.
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You shouldn't apologize for what I asked of you some time ago. Criticizm is also abaut learning abaut other people's style.
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Ooooo, szarości o.O Fajny strój ma ta dziołszka :3
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wiem, jak tam idzie OSSP przy okazji? Bedzie jaka misja dla dwóch lasek?
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Będzie, mam już połowę nastę
Misja będzie, nawet kilka :3
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zacznę od uszu, ładne, ale zdecydowanie za duże i takie za kanciaste, dodatkowo unikaj wyjeżdżania konturami rzeczy, które są z tyłu na rzeczy, które są z przodu, jak np. kawałek tych "spodni" najeżdża konturowo na miecz, a oko to już w ogóle prawie całe przed włosami jest
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Whoa! I love it! It's as awesome as i expected! Wow thanks so much i love it! I wish you could know how much i like it! 
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so far, there seems to be no noticable mistakes, at least i haven't noticed any, very well drawn i must say...
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: D I like how you drew the sword, veeeeeedy sharp
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Its more of a club if ya ask me >_>
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lD whichever can inflict the most pain would suffice
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