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Blkbltprincess [2009-11-08 20:14:33 +0000 UTC]

I received your note about checking out your gallery, since you said it seems like something is missing. To me your characters in your pictures seem to have little to no lively hood and they have no shadow. Life is full of shadows and it shows whether what your looking at is real or not. I am not the perfect artist, but I know shading can help bring characters to life. About the lively hood I would suggest adding the slightest tad of color or scenery because without either the picture looks more like a photo shoot rather than life. That is all I can recommend for now. I enjoy your work so try new things. Add a twist to what you know to add more flair to your creations. ^^

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Cloudy-skiez [2009-11-04 22:32:31 +0000 UTC]

I would reccomend giving her thicker eyelashes and less thick eyebrows... Other than the face needing more feminality, it's lovely! You've got a good grasp on anatomy there. The poportions are just about spot-on. Nice work, though!

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samuraXIV [2009-11-02 17:32:20 +0000 UTC]

You seem to have put a lot of detail into this one compared to your other drawings,
especially with the clothes.
I like it!! Keep up the good work

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tin-sama [2009-10-23 05:05:29 +0000 UTC]

i know you said you would love critic, but i can't really find anything to critic at all! your art is great!! i like it very much

i do have a question on this pic though.
her lower legs or ankles or whatever.... do they go behind the lower edge of the dress?

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Dante3718 [2009-10-15 23:15:50 +0000 UTC]

0.0 XD EPIC PIC XD

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TerTam129 [2009-10-15 19:48:49 +0000 UTC]

OwO cool lineart it looks awsome Chould u do a lineart for me plz ^_^

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zilvmay [2009-10-11 00:42:56 +0000 UTC]

I think your anatomy (and the out hit) is beautiful! I especcially like the torso area.
If there were some thing to work on, I thing the only thing would be the face, you've got a good start but things could just be fine tuned.

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qwertyman20 [2009-10-08 17:14:22 +0000 UTC]

eyebrows are a little off, and a bit too big, and the ears seem to be missing... add something that shows they're there... their tip... some change in the hair to show that there's ears there. ^_^ still good stuff.

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Lomeloke [2009-10-06 23:31:34 +0000 UTC]

this is beautiful and a wonderful use of many outfits put in to one

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spoon2675 [2009-10-06 12:15:41 +0000 UTC]

Are you planning on coloring this, or leave it B&W?

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Sakebi-chan [2009-10-05 16:45:23 +0000 UTC]

wellll, what I'd do first is make the picture less big. The small view is too small to see any details (especially with just this lineart) and the big one is simply too big to see anything at all. make it about 800 pixels high or something, that's sufficient for this amount of details in a big, and it allows us all to see.

Other than that, I think that the anatomy looks really nice, although the hand on her right arm (so the one behind her back) seems a bit off. I don't think it'd be turned that far...
Also, her body looks nice and curvy, but her face doesn't look particularly female to me.

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sweetlemonade123 [2009-10-04 19:09:17 +0000 UTC]

Sorry that I'm not much of an artist but the design looks great! {Something I'd wear. }

I guess I could suggest more curves. To me, I think it would make Yuuki more feminine.

Is that good advice?

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Yuuki69 [2009-10-04 17:17:31 +0000 UTC]

OMG~! :0 to jest rysunek "to co kojarzy mi się z imieniem Yuuki?" OwO łoooo
kreatywnie~!

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