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Parkhurstflat [2017-04-17 01:21:43 +0000 UTC]
Nice, I love the description of the women feeling themselve flatten out and harden just before they become just objects. Surf's up! Excellent story!
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EFantasy89 In reply to Parkhurstflat [2017-04-17 03:44:15 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. This was tough, It went through a lot of rewrites. I'd like to ask you a few questions and would really appreciate your response. Do you have any interest in seeing more character interaction between my four magicians? Are backstories and character arcs things you would like to see more of or do you prefer more self-contained stories or situations? Does it matter either way? Thanks again and talk to you soon,
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Parkhurstflat In reply to EFantasy89 [2017-05-07 17:14:41 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I think world building would be interesting. How did the magician develop their interests in their respective fetishes? How did they find out that the had real magical powers? How did Winston find out he want to and could flatten women out? Did he have a date that wound up with him inadvertently flattening his date out? And he suddenly realized he liked that more than dating?
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Parkhurstflat In reply to EFantasy89 [2017-04-19 05:45:49 +0000 UTC]
"Are backstories and character arcs things you would like to see more of or do you prefer more self-contained stories or situations? "
Have you ever considered doing a story from the viewpoint of the victims. Maybe a young woman who is turned into an animal or runs into Winston and gets flattened. Like what they were planning to do with there life before running into him, what the early part of the day was like and what their last moments were like.
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EFantasy89 In reply to Parkhurstflat [2017-04-20 16:16:32 +0000 UTC]
Not for this world, at least not now. If I do anything like that, it would be some sort of one-off story or cap. In this world, it's about the magicians POV and their motivations. Thanks for the input. Nothing is ever written in stone.
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