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Scrivener-of-Light [2014-09-17 21:48:39 +0000 UTC]
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I really, really like this. Conceptually, this is a very strong piece. You've taken a well-known idea and displayed it in a compelling way.
In terms of composition, a general rule is to have things point to the subject and not off the page. But what you did, I think, is particularly clever. You use the contrast of the whale against the background and the centrality of Jonah on the page to make him the first point of focus. But then I found my eyes wandering up the beam of light and off the page. This really makes the composition more about God and His mercy than about Jonah and his predicament.
As far as the execution of the art work goes, you did a fantastic job--particularly with the lettering. I also like the waves, but the light blue wave above the white section has an awkward chunk cut out of it that disrupts the flow found in all the other waves. This isn't a big deal, and I understand why you did it (the angle coming off the tall wave would have been tough to position relative to the white waves).
I like the look of the whale, also, but I'm a bit torn with the design of Jonah himself. The knee area feels too heavy.
But the textures, layers of color, and overall style are absolutely wonderful.
All that said, I want to clearly state that the issues I brought up are very minor--I was definitely nitpicking. The overall impact of this piece is quite strong, and the women's retreat is blessed to have such a good design.
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Scrivener-of-Light In reply to Emberblue [2014-09-18 05:17:19 +0000 UTC]
You are welcome. And if you have any questions about my comments, feel free to ask.
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rhunel [2016-11-13 21:08:13 +0000 UTC]
That is excellent!!
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cmtvable1 [2015-12-09 23:05:52 +0000 UTC]
I don't mean to offend you but doesn't this look like Sanna Annukka's artwork for Keane's "Under the Iron Sea" album?
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HK09 [2014-10-28 21:52:20 +0000 UTC]
wow this is just so stunning!
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Parsat [2014-09-25 02:56:13 +0000 UTC]
This is a stunning design!
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levite [2014-09-22 02:55:15 +0000 UTC]
U are amazing...
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Emberblue In reply to levite [2014-09-24 16:23:30 +0000 UTC]
Thanks bro!
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Josh592 [2014-09-20 22:33:36 +0000 UTC]
Pst, Ember, you've got a spelling error.
You typed "patent" instead of "patient", I just caught it and figured I'd let you know.
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darkredmaplesword [2014-09-19 19:17:35 +0000 UTC]
it's a really cute whale...0-0b
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Feesu-san [2014-09-18 07:23:53 +0000 UTC]
0-0 EPIC!!!!!
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Dawnchaser [2014-09-18 03:47:49 +0000 UTC]
What a clever design!
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Aw0 In reply to Emberblue [2014-09-17 22:29:39 +0000 UTC]
no prob ^^
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ArtistXero [2014-09-17 18:58:14 +0000 UTC]
I'm liking this. That whale look like some cool robot submarine whale. Robot submarine whales for everyone!
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Emberblue In reply to ArtistXero [2014-09-17 19:48:15 +0000 UTC]
Bet you didn't know that Keane was my inspiration for this. Their album "Under the Iron Sea" has brilliant artwork. Check out their robot submarine whale:
i554.photobucket.com/albums/jj…
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ArtistXero In reply to Emberblue [2014-09-17 19:54:50 +0000 UTC]
Well that one's pretty cool too. Maybe they should have a duel or something and see which one reigns supreme!
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Emberblue In reply to ArtistXero [2014-09-17 20:07:04 +0000 UTC]
Or they could get married and make robot submarine whale babies. Robot submarine whales for everyone!!!
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ArtistXero In reply to Emberblue [2014-09-17 20:22:23 +0000 UTC]
My boy version: they fight.
You girl version: they marry.
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