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enigma-theory — Scarification Of Love.
Published: 2010-07-08 09:02:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 1196; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 3
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Capturing a glimpse of my reflection,It is you who reflects back at me.
And it hurts..
knowing you still possess the power
To burn a hole through my soul..
They say time heals all wounds;
But memories linger,
And scars remain.
Acid tears they wont desist,
Deepest fears they do persist,
Of longing temptations I must resist,
For emotions such as this must not exist..
Apathetic heart beats quiescent,
Emotions retract while I lament,
For possession of a love so ambient,
Was bound to be seized by abolishment.
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Not many people I've met here write meaningful short emotional poems filled with reflection and insight. Yours does pretty good in that
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I like this. It's strong, it's powerful and it's emotional!
The only thing i would say about it is that the rhyming scheme is inconsistent. You start off with no rhyming, but then you suddenly rhyme your stanzas. I think if you're going to rhyme your stanzas, you should do all or nothing; keep it consistent.
You use such big words too ^.^ That's not a bad thing, don't get me wrong. Just leaves my head spinning just a little 
Very good piece!
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yeah i did that with the intention of introducing the message and then having the rhyme elaborate the feelings in a whole new way, i wanted it to have a different spin on it.. and yeah i cant help the words, its just how i write, sorry for making ur head spin that must hurt
thank u for the comment
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Ah i see 
Yeah it does a bit 
You are welcome!
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hahaha then im introducing new ones to u then! hehe
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Yes! And i thank you for that, hehe ^.^
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OH MY GOD! i didnt realise i hadnt added u to my watch yet! i feel so ashamed!
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Aww no need to! Hehe. Thanks for the watch now xD
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i thought i had watched u ages ago!
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Dont worry, i'm the same xD
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hahahaha cool i dont feel left out now!
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this is heartingly beautiful.. thank you for posting.
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thank u for reading, im glad u liked it
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Wow I really like this! You use such elegant words and capturing sentences ^^
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aww thank u so much for that 
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If i had to say......I would say this is emotionally descriptive very well and the rhymes go well and fine, Quite the peice it is which im sure you really tried hard to get it up to this.
Pretty good' best of luck with any future poetry.
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honestly it didnt take me much time to come up with this at all, im surprisingly good when it comes to choosing words and rhyming and such. i just didnt know whether i was on the right track or not when it came to "poetry that rhyms but also flows well".. so i decided not to post it when i had initially written it. but then i thought what better way to find out then to get the opinions of fellow writers? so i posted it hehe. thanks for ur comment i appreciate it.
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Heh. Your very welcome, glad to have viewed it and i gotta say the rhymes were just fine really and you certainly made it all work out somehow, I wouldnt know what else to say about this but you sure did something on it' ^"^ Good luck for any future peices and such, You do seem good at this i do have to say
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hehe aww thank u very much, it means a lot
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It is no probelm at all and your way welcome' Good to few some of your work Enigma
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