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Published: 2010-07-14 23:18:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 520; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 9
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Description Blood-shot eyes
Broken hearts
That sweet, sticky liquid on my fingers
It's not mine
But it brings me some kind of satisfaction
As the shimmering edge pene//trates
The secretion
f
   l
o
   w
i
   n
g
   d
o
   w
n
my arms
Sliding down my hands
And dripping from my
finger
        t
        i
        p
        s
It's my solace
My release
My drug
And the antidote
Is that your pain remains g r e a t e r than mine
That I show you what you've done to me
In the same sick
T
  w
    i
     s
    t
   e
d
Gut-wrenching manner
That you love so much
The way you imply it on others
Has now been
      t
     u
    r
   n
  e
d
on you
I walk to your body
Broken and beaten
On the porcelain floor
A smirk gracing my face
As I kick your cadaver to roll it over
I stop smiling
I don't see your face
But instead
My own
I blink once
And I am the one on the floor
With you
t
o
w
e
r
i
n
g
over me once again
Unharmed
Unwounded
Untouched
The small bayonet clenched in your hand
As I am unable to m o v e
You stand on each/ side of my body
And slowly lower yourself
Crushing my center
You bring your arm up behind you
Stiletto in hand
And
p
l
u
n
g
e

the steel in to my chest
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Comments: 33

kittenspore [2010-07-30 04:15:35 +0000 UTC]

I lovelovelove this layout !~ ♥ ♥

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xmemoriesXofXnobodyx In reply to kittenspore [2010-07-30 18:45:28 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much

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kittenspore In reply to xmemoriesXofXnobodyx [2010-07-30 18:58:18 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!! >w<

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Yobi-chan [2010-07-20 21:03:10 +0000 UTC]

Nice layout and great poem, sick and great :3

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xmemoriesXofXnobodyx In reply to Yobi-chan [2010-07-21 16:00:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

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Yobi-chan In reply to xmemoriesXofXnobodyx [2010-07-25 14:58:01 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome :3

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Shadow-in-my-Heart [2010-07-17 13:56:29 +0000 UTC]

I love this! I think its so cool how you made the letters form squigly lines and.. the strait lines too

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xmemoriesXofXnobodyx In reply to Shadow-in-my-Heart [2010-07-17 17:00:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^^ I've seen some other writers do things like this, so I decided to try it and see how it worked....I actually like it ^^ I'll probably use this style in the future, too

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PlagueRatsEA [2010-07-16 03:12:01 +0000 UTC]

the way you wrote the page really flowed the feeling down! I got really into it!

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xmemoriesXofXnobodyx In reply to PlagueRatsEA [2010-07-16 20:06:09 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you like it!

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PlagueRatsEA In reply to xmemoriesXofXnobodyx [2010-07-17 03:06:02 +0000 UTC]

it was epic, dude!

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xmemoriesXofXnobodyx In reply to PlagueRatsEA [2010-07-17 03:06:57 +0000 UTC]

Haha thank you

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PlagueRatsEA In reply to xmemoriesXofXnobodyx [2010-07-17 03:15:03 +0000 UTC]

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xmemoriesXofXnobodyx In reply to PlagueRatsEA [2010-07-17 03:20:19 +0000 UTC]

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PlagueRatsEA In reply to xmemoriesXofXnobodyx [2010-07-17 03:45:26 +0000 UTC]

why sad....?

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xmemoriesXofXnobodyx In reply to PlagueRatsEA [2010-07-17 17:02:23 +0000 UTC]

A lot of things in my life are catching up to me and overwhelming me...

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PlagueRatsEA In reply to xmemoriesXofXnobodyx [2010-07-17 18:29:17 +0000 UTC]

well I hope everything turns out fine, just remember that no matter what happens everything has a reason and a purpose (that is, i you believe in that kind of thing)

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xmemoriesXofXnobodyx In reply to PlagueRatsEA [2010-07-17 18:38:06 +0000 UTC]

Yes...and thank you

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PlagueRatsEA In reply to xmemoriesXofXnobodyx [2010-07-17 18:54:01 +0000 UTC]

^_^

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give-me-my-art-plz [2010-07-15 06:09:13 +0000 UTC]

Woah, major twister in the end

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xmemoriesXofXnobodyx In reply to give-me-my-art-plz [2010-07-15 11:07:59 +0000 UTC]

Haha yeah

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give-me-my-art-plz In reply to xmemoriesXofXnobodyx [2010-07-15 19:25:38 +0000 UTC]

I love twsiters

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xmemoriesXofXnobodyx In reply to give-me-my-art-plz [2010-07-15 19:29:07 +0000 UTC]

Yay ^_^

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give-me-my-art-plz In reply to xmemoriesXofXnobodyx [2010-07-15 19:29:59 +0000 UTC]

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D0omKitty [2010-07-15 03:18:11 +0000 UTC]

i really like your piece. very powerful in my opinion

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xmemoriesXofXnobodyx In reply to D0omKitty [2010-07-15 03:22:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

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MoreaGaara [2010-07-15 00:03:27 +0000 UTC]

"the steal in to my chest"
steel might work better there.

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xmemoriesXofXnobodyx In reply to MoreaGaara [2010-07-15 00:23:25 +0000 UTC]

Oh sorry...misspelling on my part...thanks for catching that

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MoreaGaara In reply to xmemoriesXofXnobodyx [2010-07-15 00:35:16 +0000 UTC]

it's okay. i really liked the piece. ^^

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xmemoriesXofXnobodyx In reply to MoreaGaara [2010-07-15 00:39:26 +0000 UTC]

Yay ^_^ I'm glad someone did

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Seraph-Rose [2010-07-14 23:50:01 +0000 UTC]

i like how you set out certain words. it looks like you're letting them pour down the page. i really like it (=

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xmemoriesXofXnobodyx In reply to Seraph-Rose [2010-07-14 23:52:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^^
It was the first time I've tried something like that so I'm glad you like it

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Seraph-Rose In reply to xmemoriesXofXnobodyx [2010-07-15 00:04:09 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome ^ - ^

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