Comments: 17
spunkyhotbread [2011-05-31 23:56:31 +0000 UTC]
I just realizd that my characters bg sounds similiar to your characters... I swear I didn't even look at your chara's bio before I came up with my characters bio! I'm sorry! Could you read my charcters bio and tell me if I should change it? I'm so sorry!!! Now I feel bad...
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mydogbob [2011-05-29 19:12:41 +0000 UTC]
I really love this design as a whole. If you don't mind me critiquing, I would try to include something about the bandages around her mouth. I would aim for something like how/if her speech is hurting from it, how she got it, etc. This will fill in a couple questions about her character design as well.
I would also try to break her bio up into smaller paragraphs. No offense at all because it was well written, but I got a little lost in all of the words. It will just make it easier for some people to read, that's my only problem.
But I adore her, her back story, her design and the character over all! Great job!
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mydogbob In reply to EvilChickSquad [2011-05-30 04:28:00 +0000 UTC]
Welcome and I hope we can RP soon!
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Rotami [2011-04-25 08:25:50 +0000 UTC]
She's tall like my character~ C:
High five for little characters~ C:
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Phoenix1027 [2011-04-23 00:16:24 +0000 UTC]
This is really nice. Poor thing looks tortured though.
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kris258 [2011-04-22 18:53:14 +0000 UTC]
wow i love this stufed doll
...and it has delicious BLOOD
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EvilChickSquad In reply to kris258 [2011-04-22 19:20:56 +0000 UTC]
why thank you. You're the first person to notice that. XD
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Izikk [2011-04-22 07:12:22 +0000 UTC]
Oh my gosh, adorableness explosion~ *dies*
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EvilChickSquad In reply to Izikk [2011-04-22 13:00:08 +0000 UTC]
Tehe... Thanks! I'm really hoping to get in, but there are some apps that are a lot better *cofflikeyourscoff*. It's nice to see that at least someone likes it :3
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