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Published: 2011-04-21 22:30:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 1744; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 6
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Description My submission for the Toy Store....
You have no idea how long it took me to do this. Seriously almost 7 hours, which is a lot of work for me and, lol my drawing skilz stillfail. Completely.... Oh well.
Just some info on Kiki.
Here we go:
Name: Nariko Norcott. Goes by Kiki.
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Species: Living toy. More specifically, a Stuffed Rabbit.
Job: Designer. Well, probably just an assistant or something. She does sketching and finds fabric.
Height: 4'9 She's a shortie :3
Weight: 87 lbs.- She's also really light! 0_o
Weapon: Though not a fighter, her klutziness can sometimes help trip her enemies up -_-
Abilities: A hard worker, Kiki can design a new toy in record time. She is also very handy with pins and needles.
Personality: A bubbly and sometimes shy toy, Kiki takes some warming up to, but once she gets to know you, she's a funny, witty and extremely sarcastic girl. She's also a bit of a blabbermouth.
Likes: Sewing And Designing, soda, cake, dyeing fabrics to create her own colors, unique color combinations, candy and creeping people out just for the heck of it.
Dislikes: messing up a prototype, not being able to put her ideas on paper, snakes, rats with red eyes, flat surfaces that she trips over.
Other:
Nariko has worked in the Toy Shop since she was ten, and has worked her way up to the position of designer. She absolutely hates being called short, though everyone at the shop loves to bug hold it over her head *bad pun*. She is generally calm and quiet, but talks a lot when she gets nervous (mainly when Nol, the bosslady makes her rounds) She tries to help in any way possible, but is a bit of a klutz, and is constantly knocking over bins and such...
Bio:
A little girl got Kiki, as a stuffed rabbit, for her fifth birthday. She took Kiki everywhere and gave her lots of love. She used to use Kiki as a pillow when she was frightened, and when she cut her knee on a piece of glass, Kiki "kissed" it all better (hence the blood on her knees). The constant wear and tear Kiki went through lost her her mouth and one eye, but she still loved the girl.


As the girl grew older, she lost interest in the now battered stuffed rabbit she used to play with, and began to take interest in new things. Her parents bought her a sketchbook one year, and the girl began to dabble in designing clothes. Kiki saw this with the one good eye she had left, and longed to be able to make her girl happy like designing did. She memorized pleats and folds and seams and designs, taking it all in from her dusty spot on the shelf.


Then one day, the girl picked Kiki up, dusted her off, and stuck her in her backpack. The family was moving, and it seemed as if the girl had not forgotten her childhood friend. The family loaded everything onto the roof of their car an sped away down a lonely backroad. The car was bumpy, though, and the backpack with Kiki in it flew off and onto the side of the road.


She lay there some weeks until a returning body snatcher stepped on her and picked her up. After being brought to Nol, who animated little Kiki, she was asked if she had any talents. The newly animated girl tried to talk, but her mouth was so dry and cracked (because she lost her mouth with her girl) that when she tried to speak, the new flesh ripped and she shrieked in pain. ( since then, she always wears a bandage over her mouth because when she speaks her mouth burns in pain and begins to bleed. Needless to say, she doesn't speak unless necessary. )

It was then that Kiki remembered all of those designs that her girl drew, and she was put to work as a designer's assistant. She excelled in her superior's craft after the first three years, and was promoted to full designer. Since then she has become a valuable asset to the Toy Store and is one of their fastest designers.


Critique encouraged/welcome.
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Comments: 17

spunkyhotbread [2011-05-31 23:56:31 +0000 UTC]

I just realizd that my characters bg sounds similiar to your characters... I swear I didn't even look at your chara's bio before I came up with my characters bio! I'm sorry! Could you read my charcters bio and tell me if I should change it? I'm so sorry!!! Now I feel bad...

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mydogbob [2011-05-29 19:12:41 +0000 UTC]

I really love this design as a whole. If you don't mind me critiquing, I would try to include something about the bandages around her mouth. I would aim for something like how/if her speech is hurting from it, how she got it, etc. This will fill in a couple questions about her character design as well.

I would also try to break her bio up into smaller paragraphs. No offense at all because it was well written, but I got a little lost in all of the words. It will just make it easier for some people to read, that's my only problem.


But I adore her, her back story, her design and the character over all! Great job!

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EvilChickSquad In reply to mydogbob [2011-05-30 04:19:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the crit I really appreciate it. I Totally forgot abut the bandages, and I guess you're right about the paragraphs-I'll break them up. Your advice was really helpful, and I'm glad you like her!

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mydogbob In reply to EvilChickSquad [2011-05-30 04:28:00 +0000 UTC]

Welcome and I hope we can RP soon!

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EvilChickSquad In reply to mydogbob [2011-05-30 04:37:28 +0000 UTC]

Me Too!

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mydogbob In reply to EvilChickSquad [2011-05-30 13:43:38 +0000 UTC]

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Rotami [2011-04-25 08:25:50 +0000 UTC]

She's tall like my character~ C:
High five for little characters~ C:

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EvilChickSquad In reply to Rotami [2011-04-25 11:21:18 +0000 UTC]

*Virtual high five*

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Phoenix1027 [2011-04-23 00:16:24 +0000 UTC]

This is really nice. Poor thing looks tortured though.

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EvilChickSquad In reply to Phoenix1027 [2011-04-24 23:12:47 +0000 UTC]

uhh.... Thanks? She is a bit... emotionally disturbed to say the least...

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kris258 [2011-04-22 18:53:14 +0000 UTC]

wow i love this stufed doll
...and it has delicious BLOOD

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EvilChickSquad In reply to kris258 [2011-04-22 19:20:56 +0000 UTC]

why thank you. You're the first person to notice that. XD

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kris258 In reply to EvilChickSquad [2011-04-22 19:39:17 +0000 UTC]

oh why your welcome

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Nikki-vdp [2011-04-22 08:30:47 +0000 UTC]

Great clothing design and colour scheme

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EvilChickSquad In reply to Nikki-vdp [2011-04-22 13:00:45 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like it!

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Izikk [2011-04-22 07:12:22 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gosh, adorableness explosion~ *dies*

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EvilChickSquad In reply to Izikk [2011-04-22 13:00:08 +0000 UTC]

Tehe... Thanks! I'm really hoping to get in, but there are some apps that are a lot better *cofflikeyourscoff*. It's nice to see that at least someone likes it :3

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