Comments: 21
seawolf9 [2008-01-27 20:06:58 +0000 UTC]
It's a good job by comparison to my stuff, and you've got potential, but... *constructive criticism follows*
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Something's...off...about their faces. The little chibi ones are fine -- great, in fact -- but the regular ones are...distorted.
The left side of Raven's face has wonky perspective -- it shortens into nothing too soon for the angle we're seeing her at, if that makes any sense -- and something looks wrong with Beast Boy's eye. Maybe it's the combination of shine + dark-colored iris.
Eyes are an unholy bitch and a half to draw, though, so that's not too big a deal. I've got a sketch where I wound up drawing the character in sunglasses so I didn't have to struggle with getting the eye just right.
The fact that Beast Boy's neck is about half again the length it should be, on the other hand...eh, that I can complain about.
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Doddle-Bug [2006-01-11 03:16:49 +0000 UTC]
>3< b !!!!!! He is soo cute and raven is pretty! ^___^ good job on the cg!!
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fallenarchseraph [2005-12-29 19:08:25 +0000 UTC]
Pretty good, your noses could use some work, but hey, I'm one to talk.
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BreakComa7 [2005-12-02 03:52:23 +0000 UTC]
OMGOSH!!!
I LOVE TEEN TITANS>>>
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LordDante715 [2005-09-14 05:34:00 +0000 UTC]
cool Gaf looks like he does in the books
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DynaChrissy [2005-08-27 02:57:51 +0000 UTC]
Raven (for some reason) looks french. :/ I dunno. Is really pretty! :3 nice work!
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TherealRNO In reply to DynaChrissy [2006-04-11 13:11:51 +0000 UTC]
BB does too. The style reminds me a bit of the style drawn for CL's Ulrich & Yumi for some reason...
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EvilRyokoJesse In reply to DynaChrissy [2005-08-27 03:10:13 +0000 UTC]
hahah French? You're a goof. Thanks so much for the comment!
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Angelypoo [2005-08-23 05:44:55 +0000 UTC]
I like it! I love the expression on the mini BB's face.. Priceless... lol!!
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EvilRyokoJesse In reply to Angelypoo [2005-08-23 06:24:20 +0000 UTC]
YAY! Sad as this sounds, that's my favourite part too. (that and Raven's ultra-trendy bangs, hahah) thanks for the comment!
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TherealRNO In reply to Lilr [2006-04-10 13:50:12 +0000 UTC]
She comes back...and dumps Beast Boy, thus leaving him "available", but not for long...*snickers*
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Aslan1 [2005-08-22 09:57:23 +0000 UTC]
So that's what's going on in Ravens head, heh, i should have known.
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kineticnovels [2005-08-15 16:05:47 +0000 UTC]
Great job! Your anatomy and style are improving. I'm so pleased for you!
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