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Published: 2012-08-14 13:54:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 592; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 6
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Description Johnny was a little boy
little boy
little boy
Johnny was a little boy
A happy, joyful lad
Daddy came into his room
To his room
To his room
Daddy came into his room
And hurt him really bad
Mummy turned her back on them
Back on them
Back on them
Mummy turned her back on them
and gently closed the door
One day Johnny ad enough
had enough
had enough
One day Johnny had enough
and took them in his jaws
He tore until there breathing stopped
breathing stopped
breathing stopped
He tore until their breathing stopped
Now John would fear no more.


Extremely late entry for the 'Family portraits" Contest over at Probably a bit intense/gory but meh. My character does grow up to be a cannibalistic madman

This entry is obscenely late and was whipped up in about 30-50 minutes. :I

Johnny Kerr (c) Myself
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Comments: 27

Shadowblazer117 [2012-11-25 20:05:21 +0000 UTC]

Nick killed his parents cause he found out they were working for the other team

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Fel-Fisk In reply to Shadowblazer117 [2012-11-27 07:34:40 +0000 UTC]

....? no he killed his parents because his father was sadistic and cruel and horrible and abusive and his mother never tried to stop him.

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Shadowblazer117 In reply to Fel-Fisk [2012-11-30 23:34:33 +0000 UTC]

im not talking about johnny

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northernlight33 [2012-08-23 00:45:39 +0000 UTC]

The pic's so intense that I like it. I think that's what the Sly fandom needs, some gridmark such as this.

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Fel-Fisk In reply to northernlight33 [2012-08-24 13:26:56 +0000 UTC]

Always willing to stain the otherwise cheerful sly cooper fandom with a pinch of gore and madness

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northernlight33 In reply to Fel-Fisk [2012-08-25 04:15:33 +0000 UTC]

You know, I found on the forums that someone wrote this really cool Sly Cooper grimdark/creepy pasta fanfic [link]
(under reply #10)
That takes the cake

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Fel-Fisk In reply to northernlight33 [2012-08-25 05:01:50 +0000 UTC]

0_0 well that was disgusting. Sly's reactions are rather unrealistic- he would probably just break down after seeing the first corpse, or at least after the first few, most people would. Plus the writing itself is rather so-so, it doesn't really describe things in a captivating way,doesn't describe pain well, barely describes the fear, little to no use of figurative language at all really. If it described things more figuratively, more showing, no telling, it would've probably freaked me out/sickened me a lot more, plus dimitri's motivation is a bit, weak.
But aside from that. freaky-as disturbing tale, makes me wanna write some gory/disturbing Sly cooper/other fandom fan-fics.

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northernlight33 In reply to Fel-Fisk [2012-08-26 07:14:42 +0000 UTC]

Same thoughts as I have, but a still a good read for myself.

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northernlight33 In reply to northernlight33 [2012-08-23 00:47:23 +0000 UTC]

My bad, its spelled 'grimdark', sheesh me and my spelling x)

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dog-it-dude [2012-08-15 22:22:52 +0000 UTC]

This is really messed up, ohohoho, but I love the theme and the silhouette and the sketchyness. c: Nicely done.

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emilition [2012-08-14 20:59:59 +0000 UTC]

So Johnny was a happy kid until his parents started neglecting him? Awwww

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Fel-Fisk In reply to emilition [2012-08-14 22:45:04 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, poor abused kid, it kinda drove him mad

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emilition In reply to Fel-Fisk [2012-08-14 22:59:39 +0000 UTC]

Now I just want to give him a hug. That is as long as I could keep my innards in place! But seriously, I feel like hugging your fan character right now

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Fel-Fisk In reply to emilition [2012-08-15 23:27:27 +0000 UTC]

yeah, the poor deranged thing... should make some cute art of him, like all snuggled up in a sweater or something

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emilition In reply to Fel-Fisk [2012-08-16 00:02:38 +0000 UTC]

Yeah you should! I'd love to see a little Johnny! If not then maybe I could draw Johnny some time

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CutePirateBabe [2012-08-14 18:26:55 +0000 UTC]

That little rhyme was my favorite part. :3

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Fel-Fisk In reply to CutePirateBabe [2012-08-14 22:45:13 +0000 UTC]

030 thanks

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CutePirateBabe In reply to Fel-Fisk [2012-08-24 00:25:44 +0000 UTC]

MMmm Hmm ^^

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Vixcoon [2012-08-14 17:59:20 +0000 UTC]

O w O;;;; I fear Johnny right about now .______. ....

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EmilieSushi [2012-08-14 16:18:40 +0000 UTC]

*gasp* I already gave my vote for that contest, I can't include you in now! TT^TT
Well, that's pretty dark! O3O

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SBB-CKB [2012-08-14 14:00:25 +0000 UTC]

*-*

Speechless *-*

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PTLPYT [2012-08-14 13:57:07 +0000 UTC]

.....awsome pic and awsome story lol....

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Fel-Fisk In reply to PTLPYT [2012-08-14 14:00:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^w^

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PTLPYT In reply to Fel-Fisk [2012-08-15 05:25:26 +0000 UTC]

yw

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TravisRaccoonus [2012-08-14 13:56:34 +0000 UTC]

geeze this is dark

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Fel-Fisk In reply to TravisRaccoonus [2012-08-14 14:00:35 +0000 UTC]

ehehe, force of habit...

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TravisRaccoonus In reply to Fel-Fisk [2012-08-14 14:11:01 +0000 UTC]

great job on this and good luck in the contest

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