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Published: 2008-10-03 00:30:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 847; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 10
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Damn, he's ugly.
Fist as he appears in Fire and Ice.
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Wow, I love his design! He looks totally brutal.
So, is this a fanfic or something? Can it be read somewhere?
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I'm glad you like it. Brutal is the name of the game.
Yeah, it's his design from a fanfic of mine. It's pretty dark, and a KiGo, but if you find that of interest then by all means, check it out.
Here is the original: [link]
And here is the sequel: [link]
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Oh, wow. That was amazing! Just read and reviewed the first one.
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I'm really glad to hear you liked it. ^_^
And thanks so much for giving my story a chance even though it's a KiGo. That means a lot to me.
I hope you enjoy the second installment just as much as the first, if not more so. Fist is a major player therein.
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Put up a Kigo sign and people will flock to the fic. It may take some time, but they will eventually see that ir's not just the kigo, but the other elements of the story that make it great.
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Wow.^^ Thanks for saying so. I do hope that people of all ships enjoy this fic, simply based of the story.
Thanks! XD
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They should; yours is a mix of sci-fi, drama, and romance. Who doesn't love that?
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^Totally forgot THAT factor...here's hoping Rondo-san put in some serious overtime at Yamanouchi, 'cause I somehow doubt the usual dumb luck/skills will help him anywhere but into an early grave...at best.
And just for the record, I'd have to rank Amy's gorilla mode as the single most disturbing image canon-KP has ever burned into my frontal lobe, with her Rufus/Barkin fusion a close second and Ron's brief stint as "Naco-Hulk" running a distant third. With relationship prospects like that, no wonder MF's always kinda testy.
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I like the concept and execution. You can see the new elements of his character, yet still see remainng strands of his former, and I use this term loosely, life.
Nice touch with the feet gauntlets as well. They really give authenticity to the whole monkey aspect. Hey, I just had a thought...
Considering that Mystical Monkey Power is a supernatural force, and supernatural forces tend to override the rules of Life and Death.... Does he still possess them? And if so, heas being Necrolized enhanced those abilities in any way?
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Thanks. Fist was a challenge t Necrolize since there were so many factors to take into account; the standard pigmentation and muscle mass issues, his pre-altered DNA, Drakken's tastes, and just everything really.
Regarding the MMP, let's just say for now that the subject is set to come up soon in a bad way. Fist is a bitter ANGRY man. With every right to be.
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Sweet. In a sense, you can't really blame him for what he's doing. First of all, he was Necrolized against his will, and second, he's got nothing else left for him. I like that in a villain. Catch you at the next chapter or pic that goes with the story!
Keep up the great work!
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Fiske never did strike me as a guy who bothered too much with appearance...and that particular concern has probably dropped off his radar completely at this point.
Fascinating array of creepy elements here...the hunch & coat lend a definite Igor vibe, whilst that bestial underbite, matted hair & mad, mad gaze essentially fuse Mr. Hyde with one of Dr. Moreau's experiments. And what a job on those gauntlets.
Odd thoughts:
(1) what, if anything, would a "healthy" helping of Substance do to, say, fresh monkey (or baboon/chimp/gorilla) ninja recruits?
and (2) given his current state, would Monty be keen on enlisting Amy's aid and/or bringing her into the fold? Now THAT's nightmare fodder waiting to happen.
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You're absolutely right on with those comparisons. A LOT of his design is from those old literature sources, since... well, he's an aristocrat, or at least was. He's not going to "monster up" like everyone else. The man has standards.
I'm happy you like his look. And the gauntlets. They took some real work.
As for your thoughts, regarding the monkey ninja question... Well, let's just say Fist has retained some of his old personality. The subject of Substance Monkeys will come up soon enough.
As for DNAmy... she has her place in this story. In quite a frightening way.^^
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Death was not so kind for Ol' Monty as it was to Shego; she got to keep her looks while he became monsterous. Though he doesn't seem to mind in the story so far, the added power he's gained and the terror he can cause just from his looks probably more than makes up for it in his mind I imagine.
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His feelings on his new state of being will be cleared up in time. Suffice to say, Ol' Monty may surprise you all. In fact, I almost guarantee it.
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