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Published: 2009-05-19 18:41:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 514; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 6
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september was never a happy month for herbecause sometimes she got the feeling she was an apple
and they fell down. rain drops
scattered around her collar bone so that for a moment
she'd feel like someone was there
and she'd smile. it takes
forty-three muscles to frown but only
seventeen to smile. sometimes she thought
she needed the excercise.
.
she had been sitting there for a day, not moving
except for a sudden flinch every one hour and thirty-six minutes
when she'd scrape her knuckles in the gravel pit until
they would bleed over the bruises
she had gotten.
.
but, then again, october was never even a month.
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Comments: 30
the ending confused me just a little, but i loved it entirely.
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awh, thanks!
it confuses me too 0.o it's weird how sometimes people understand my writing better than i do. but oh well!
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forty-three muscles to frown but only
seventeen to smile. sometimes she thought
she needed the excercise.
that was brilliant, just genius.
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i was just going to say!
those lines are amazing.
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I AGREE WITH KRISH (as usual).
I also loveloveadore the last line.
You're ah-may-zing.
(Hehe, it has a ZING! at the end. That's pretty cool.)
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awh, thankyou! :3
ZING FTW.
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Just... just back away... slowly...
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"but, then again, october was never even a month."
For some reason, I really like that line.
Amazing job, as always
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awh, thankyou so so much!
[november was the best because that was when i met you]
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This is gorgeous. I don't know what else to say. I absolutely love the imagery
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thankyou so much!
i'm really glad you like it
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"rain drops
scattered around her collar bone so that for a moment
she'd feel like someone was there
and she'd smile."
favorite part. 
this is lovely.
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"september was never a happy month for her
because sometimes she got the feeling she was an apple
and they fell down."
Lovely imagery~ I... don't really understand what the story is, but it gives me a very real emotion anyways, even if I don't know why. I think it's wonderful.
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haha, i don't even know if i get it myself!
but thankyouuuu
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some really stunning images and ideas here. its a lovely piece, as is, very poignant.
well weaved. *tips hat in respect*
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haha, why thankyou very much
and nice hat, i've got to say!
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awh, thankyou so much!
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You're welcome sweetie (:
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