mirandaadria [2019-03-06 08:50:22 +0000 UTC]
If I may, I'd like to offer some constructive criticism. You've got a solid concept here, this idea of walking up into the "heavens", so to speak, and finding a better place beyond all the chaos and destruction. However, I feel the escalator is a bit out of place. If perhaps it was floating rocks in the form of stairs, or maybe some old steps from a temple, it might blend in with the scene a bit more. The thing is you have this desolate wasteland, but then also have a clean piece of technology. It feels out of place. Despite that, like I said, the idea is good. The use of red/orange bokeh to simulate sparks is clever and interesting.
Hopefully this helps!
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