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foxy-eva — Love leads to pain............
Published: 2004-12-15 12:46:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 164; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description For me love leads to pain
Do I have to go through it all again
My feelings for you are growing strong
And it's a mistake, I know it's wrong
But I can't help the things that I feel
When I look into your eyes it feels so real

I wish this wasn't my role to play
Why does it always has to be this way
When I fall in love, it's never right
I just want to be held by you tonight
When you're not aware I study your face
It hurts me, knowing I'll never take her place

For me love leads to pain
I cry as I'm walking in the pouring rain
And the pain just wont go away
When you're near I don't know what to say
Sometimes I feel you watching me
But you do it when you think I don't see

For me this is all so confusing
And love's a game I'm so use to losing
It get hard to breathe when you're close to me
And I wonder why you don't see
I'm clueless, I don't know what to do
I just know that I'm in love with you
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Comments: 12

montparnasse [2005-01-04 14:51:46 +0000 UTC]

Simply conveyed but deep. Would make a great song

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foxy-eva In reply to montparnasse [2005-01-04 14:53:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank u! I hope that I can make a song of it someday!

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montparnasse In reply to foxy-eva [2005-01-04 14:57:30 +0000 UTC]

Yes. I also personally like the subject matter. I deal with that in most of the works I have put up.

I think about it all the time, but you put it so simply and directly. Love leads to pain.

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foxy-eva In reply to montparnasse [2005-01-04 15:00:23 +0000 UTC]

Yeah! For me love always leads to pain, to be all cynical!!

Thank u! tho'! But it seems like theres something missing in it.. And well see if I find it!!

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montparnasse In reply to foxy-eva [2005-01-04 15:07:21 +0000 UTC]

After the third verse break the rythmn and think of a few lines that sum the song up. Imagine that the music would completely change at that point and write to that.

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foxy-eva In reply to montparnasse [2005-01-04 15:09:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'll try and work on it! But Im very bad with the whole melody and stuff... :S

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sirdregan [2004-12-16 07:17:07 +0000 UTC]

It's better now but i think there's still something missing, don't know *confused*
it's to early in the morning right now

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foxy-eva In reply to sirdregan [2004-12-16 09:58:53 +0000 UTC]

haha!
Thank u! Yeah there is something isnt it?? I cant put my finger on it tho'!!
Well well! Look at it later okey? See if u can find out!

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sirdregan In reply to foxy-eva [2004-12-16 17:32:05 +0000 UTC]

I'm afraid i haven't the time to look at it.
I can barely afford time to comment the deviations on my watchlist

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foxy-eva In reply to sirdregan [2004-12-17 09:43:59 +0000 UTC]

Sorry I didnt mean it like that!! U dont have to look at it if u dont have time!! I hope that u dont stress urself out tho'!!
Take care!

Love -Eva xxx

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sirdregan In reply to foxy-eva [2004-12-17 15:36:48 +0000 UTC]

No no it's ok, i look at it because i like to

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foxy-eva In reply to sirdregan [2004-12-19 13:41:19 +0000 UTC]

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