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montparnasse [2005-01-04 14:51:46 +0000 UTC]
Simply conveyed but deep. Would make a great song
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montparnasse In reply to foxy-eva [2005-01-04 14:57:30 +0000 UTC]
Yes. I also personally like the subject matter. I deal with that in most of the works I have put up.
I think about it all the time, but you put it so simply and directly. Love leads to pain.
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montparnasse In reply to foxy-eva [2005-01-04 15:07:21 +0000 UTC]
After the third verse break the rythmn and think of a few lines that sum the song up. Imagine that the music would completely change at that point and write to that.
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foxy-eva In reply to montparnasse [2005-01-04 15:09:04 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I'll try and work on it! But Im very bad with the whole melody and stuff... :S
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foxy-eva In reply to sirdregan [2004-12-17 09:43:59 +0000 UTC]
Sorry I didnt mean it like that!! U dont have to look at it if u dont have time!! I hope that u dont stress urself out tho'!!
Take care!
Love -Eva xxx
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