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Published: 2020-07-13 16:12:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 446; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 0
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Description First of all, I would like to thank everyone who participated to her creation! huge thanks to:
thebadgerfoxdraws for her gemstone (Malachite)
Sir-Kunimutt for her gender (Female) and her personnality (very shy, like VERY shy)
BillyChatzo for her clothings
ChiefToad1 for her name (Esperanza)
Oracledk for her hair (red hair)
EnergyVector for her accessory (an upper arm bracelet)
MixiLee for her horns (short and curvy) and her tail (tadpole style)
SimpleSketchez fer her wings (bat like/leathery style) and her fun fact (she is a huge cheese lover)


As you can see, I started designing her before I got all the comments. I was starting to imagine her as a young succubi, maybe a teenager. I was thinking she would be full of life, curious and all. Then, I got the comment that changed a lot: She would be extremly shy.

So, I got to rethink and adapt some ideas. She would instead be a young women with a huge heart, but unable to share it because of her extreme shyness. Some accessories became more delicate to represent it better. Instead of having a ton of bracelet, I when for one finely made bracelet. She instead have a little scarf instead of a big one. I also made her wings rounder to make her softer and have something to recall the shaped we can find in malachites (waves and circles). Also, because of her color pallet, I had to make it work without hurting the eyes. Orange and malachite are quite contrasting. I was in need of something to balance everything, thus a tanned skin, browns and white. So she isn't a fully ''colored'' succubi.

Then I came of thinking of her backstory. I have so many tragic characters. What could I do to have something more positive, especially with how incubus and succubus work in Faelmon!? So I thought of a tragedy that I hate, but could be turned for the better here:


Esperanza was found as a baby by a couple of humans. They had tried for years now to have a child, but with no success. As they were both reaching 35, they were starting to lose hope. They never would have a children. Until they found this little baby. It was clear she was a demon. She had horns, wings and a tail. But they took pity on her. She was still just a baby. She needed someone. Even if she was a demon, it would have been cruel to abandon such a little being to die alone. Also, all their prayers to gods never had been answered. Maybe the demons took pity on them and offered them a blessing?

They brought her home and took care of her. If she was a gift from the demons, they were better to take care of her and, maybe, have their blessings and protections. Demons were weird beings and difficult to understand. They named her Esperanza and took care of her as their own children. She grew as a normal child, bringing them immense joy. They did have to hide her for a long time, but once they discovered she could shift into a human, life became more and more normal. Just the three of them at home, they would allow her to keep her succubi form, but when people came or if they were to be in public, she would gladly take the form of a human.

I would imagine that, somehow, after a while, Demantia and Aka would find her. Explain more about incubus and succubus to the little family. Ultimately, the parents would still love their dear Esperanza and she would decide to still live with them.

The theory about Esperanza origins would be that a woman fell pregnant, but didn't want the child at all and hated it. This woman would somehow carry through the pregnancy and abandon the child to die in the forest. As Esperanza didn't get to know love in her short existence, she died and almost immediatly rebirth as a succubi. Somehow, she didn't end up in the incubus/succubus community as the magic of the rebirth would do, but she got very lucky that the human couple found her.
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Comments: 16

EnergyVector [2020-07-14 07:32:17 +0000 UTC]

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FujeeB13 In reply to EnergyVector [2020-07-14 13:34:30 +0000 UTC]

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Speeder157 [2020-07-14 06:18:35 +0000 UTC]

Cutie good

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FujeeB13 In reply to Speeder157 [2020-07-14 13:34:04 +0000 UTC]

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MixiLee [2020-07-14 03:05:55 +0000 UTC]

She looks so pure omg

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FujeeB13 In reply to MixiLee [2020-07-14 13:33:48 +0000 UTC]

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Sir-Kunimutt [2020-07-13 23:55:08 +0000 UTC]

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FujeeB13 In reply to Sir-Kunimutt [2020-07-13 23:58:40 +0000 UTC]

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Ryonosuke00 [2020-07-13 23:43:23 +0000 UTC]

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FujeeB13 In reply to Ryonosuke00 [2020-07-13 23:58:20 +0000 UTC]

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Ryonosuke00 In reply to FujeeB13 [2020-07-14 23:08:53 +0000 UTC]

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Oracledk [2020-07-13 16:29:06 +0000 UTC]

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FujeeB13 In reply to Oracledk [2020-07-13 16:46:09 +0000 UTC]

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MicahandtheMoon [2020-07-13 16:23:30 +0000 UTC]

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FujeeB13 In reply to MicahandtheMoon [2020-07-13 16:44:54 +0000 UTC]

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MicahandtheMoon In reply to FujeeB13 [2020-07-13 17:11:48 +0000 UTC]

I can understand why she is refreshing yet also a challenge, one you succeeded with quite well ^v^

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