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Published: 2004-11-08 17:28:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 244; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description I don't like what I see in the mirror.
You made me who I am,
didn't you care about me?
Don't you see;
you didn't give a damn.
I tried to make things so clear.
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Comments: 7

Nerimon [2004-11-16 16:31:24 +0000 UTC]

I like this, and I know I'm biased with all my 'make longer' comments cos I do songs; this is beautiful though. And sure, like ~R-u-D-d-Y said, channel your emotions into your writing and you'll create some beautiful pieces.

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g2e In reply to Nerimon [2004-11-16 22:54:48 +0000 UTC]

yeah i only write poetry when i'm angry or sad, or in love.... which usually ends in sorrow. LOL either or I've always been govern by my passionate emotions and will like the artist that wrote the album "dire striaghts" will only be able to write something good if i'm in a relationship good/bad.

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R-u-D-d-Y [2004-11-15 02:00:50 +0000 UTC]

spot ON shane
this is hot.

it flows, it has a great feel, and it has a great rhyme scheme. it's reflecting, like the mirror suggested.
sorry i haven't commented on your stuff, but i have nothing to read it with
i'll be getting through it soon.

this is my favourite piece you've made
so favourite
that i'm making it a favourite.



good going
well expressed.

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g2e In reply to R-u-D-d-Y [2004-11-16 03:00:11 +0000 UTC]

WOW i was surprised to see something of mine as someone's favorites. It means a lot to me. As I said in the description, I'm not sure if I'll expanded.... I feel so drained.... she is back in my life even if temporarily and it is tearin me apart..... these people I let into my heart only end up breaking it, male or female..... I wish I could scream....scream like Lola in Run Lola Run.... to the point it just breaks things......i wish I was an island..... alone surrounded by nothing but me.

got to get a grip, i ....

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R-u-D-d-Y In reply to g2e [2004-11-16 03:07:15 +0000 UTC]

leave it as it is.

it's a gem.


dude, if you weren't busy with school, i'd suggest you come with me to play HL2 at a buddy's place tomorrow.

i'm so excited

you don't have to think about anna anymore man
but, when you do
you should just write
just let it go
get your juices flowwing and feel like you've done something constructive

i'll catch you later.

you diserved the fav.

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g2e In reply to R-u-D-d-Y [2004-11-16 22:40:02 +0000 UTC]

since i respect your opinion so much I'll take your advice and leave it as is, despite having the original idea of expanding it. enjoy the hl2... i don't really like hl one so 2 isn't shocking for me. I'm F***ing pissed that i got to buy HL2 a game i don't even want to get CS:Source though.... Valve is the devil. So is steam.... especially since after winning my 3rd cs tourny my steam won't work. I could kill the inventor of steam at the moment.

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Tal3nA [2004-11-08 22:24:30 +0000 UTC]

wow.. so hatefull I like that hope that is just poetry and don't have anything to do with your feelings.. it's not good to feel like that but is a cool poem

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