Bomber-BlueShadow [2005-01-06 01:31:40 +0000 UTC]
Man... so touching.....too sad for me! +fav
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Shandy3 [2004-10-11 22:48:33 +0000 UTC]
too nice!! +fav
KatsBrain [2004-10-07 16:27:30 +0000 UTC]
Aww, that's so sad... very emotive. I love the "deep pools of glistening ice" line, too. You describe emotions very well
Leliz [2004-10-06 18:50:15 +0000 UTC]
Good imagery. "The deep pools of glistening ice"--loved that line.
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Ghost-Spectre In reply to Leliz [2004-10-07 15:42:58 +0000 UTC]
He, he... thanks! I worked alot on this poem...