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Gohaku2 — Gray Ambition -Story-

Published: 2011-09-04 00:57:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 1044; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 45
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Description The story I wrote a while ago for
Yes, I know it's a little late, but I wanted to wait for his return from his trip so I could properly give him this. ^^

*WARNING* Story features mild violence in the form of consistent pummeling of two anthropomorphic creatures in a fight.

Gray the kind, the passive, the laid back. This gentle hybrid seems to be known for his kind nature, but don't make the mistake in calling him weak! The concept behind this story involves underestimating the hearts of the kind. Gray is kindhearted but strong willed. When faced with a challenge, this hybrid won't back down.

WhiteProject is a fan of boxing/fighting anthros, and so am I. This story combines a little insight on Gray's character with fighting action.

All characters belong to their respective owners. and

By the way, any suggestions of a group I may submit this to?
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Comments: 6

DigiDayDreamer [2011-09-11 15:34:46 +0000 UTC]

Out of curiosity, did you come up with psionic echo attack for Gray, or did WhiteProject tell that detail to you?

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Gohaku2 In reply to DigiDayDreamer [2011-09-12 02:44:15 +0000 UTC]

Heheh, I kinda came up with that
I referred to him for the parameters of this scenario and he gave me the 'O.K.' of what to include.
We actually developed Gray together
Did you enjoy this story madness?

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DigiDayDreamer In reply to Gohaku2 [2011-09-12 03:16:02 +0000 UTC]

It was fine and decently-written. Didn't like the part where the shark took off his boxing gloves, but that's just me. XD

Also, dang, I'm surprised Gray could take that much punishment and not even pass out. It was kind of like watching a DBZ fight to some respect. XD

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Gohaku2 In reply to DigiDayDreamer [2011-09-13 03:25:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot
Yeah, you do like your boxing gloves
I just wanted the punches to have a little more impact; A little punching for both sides of the interest. Gloved and bare-knuckle

Gray IS a tough hybrid!
I'm so happy you saw it like a dbz fight! It's kinda what I was going for. I've written some other fights and they end up going off into the deep end with action sequences.

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Taren14 [2011-09-04 01:59:34 +0000 UTC]

Yay, he won.

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Gohaku2 In reply to Taren14 [2011-09-04 16:53:40 +0000 UTC]

Taren! Hey man, thanks for reading
I gotta catch up with you on YM
It's been a while, eh?
I 've been so busy lately

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