Comments: 598
AngelRose9 [2019-01-05 07:04:07 +0000 UTC]
I am actually a Christian, and I do NOT believe that homosexuality is a sin.
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a-Ghost-in-Black [2018-11-17 07:06:19 +0000 UTC]
D I C C E M E R G E S B I G G A N D H A R D D E R
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universe1919 [2017-05-08 20:48:57 +0000 UTC]
Surprise this one is short.
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gemini1522 [2016-06-23 15:13:13 +0000 UTC]
Ohhh, that`s so sweet
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mastahofdisastah [2013-11-02 16:45:19 +0000 UTC]
oh these are such beautiful stories! cant wait to read the rest.
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otisali [2013-07-09 22:31:59 +0000 UTC]
I had tried everything I was able to regain my independence using this I was able to fill a void in my life you are perfect for this
[link]
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Feral-nz [2013-07-09 21:03:23 +0000 UTC]
I had reached the end of the line this would really interest you im headed straight to the top dont hesitate trying this out
[link]
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vampeve-97 [2013-03-31 10:32:07 +0000 UTC]
"it sucks" what the fuck are you smoking??
that is AMAYZING.
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fantasylover100 [2013-03-27 00:53:24 +0000 UTC]
Again. If anyone thinks that religon is good and anyone agnostic is evil, Then they got it backwards.
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DaDaddyDJ [2012-12-28 06:26:22 +0000 UTC]
It's perfectly fine. I love it, and there are only a few ways I can make it better with a cursory inspection (which is only cursory because a) I was reading it, not inspecting it, and b) I ain't no super-authority on fiction, and you're allowed to do anything you want). Honestly? The biggest changes I would make are a few spelling errors (can't tell you off the top of my head, and I don't wanna make you feel bad by searching for one) and spacing the sets of dialogue so that it's a new paragraph every time someone new speaks. That's the way that most people do it, so it's basically standardized by now. Plus, it's a great way of making sure who's talking, especially when you're reading this after 2-5 years of not even thinking about it in any way, shape, or form.
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Hellsing-Lover13 In reply to DaDaddyDJ [2013-01-13 07:33:26 +0000 UTC]
Sprry for the late reply. I've actually rewritten this story in a more streamlined version with better paragraph spacing (and better story if you ask me).
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jess666hearts [2012-12-15 17:59:33 +0000 UTC]
this is amazing
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TheButterflyGirl [2012-10-06 05:10:39 +0000 UTC]
I like what Carmela said about women who shave pubic hair. In my opinion, women shouldn't have insecurities about pubic hair on her genitals. Nature created us that way. Even men have pubic hair and I don't give a shit. Also, lets not forget that pubic hair mostly prevents bad gems from invading and infecting.
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angasil [2012-09-01 02:04:07 +0000 UTC]
"I know it sucks"?!
No, no.. You're way on the other side of that line..
I'm not just reading it, I'm devouring it!
Look what you've done! I can't stop now! And it's 5am! [link]
I'll try to leave a complete comment on the last one!
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Schwarzer-Carnifex [2012-06-25 11:36:56 +0000 UTC]
This is definately becoming one of my favourite yuris
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Conner-Black [2012-06-08 09:17:03 +0000 UTC]
i love the story
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Hellsing-Lover13 In reply to Conner-Black [2012-06-08 23:09:02 +0000 UTC]
Well, sorta. I mean, there are more things that matter. Support is a big theme.
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Amducious-666 [2012-05-10 16:28:10 +0000 UTC]
thats sweet
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dennyt93 [2012-03-16 10:08:42 +0000 UTC]
I really like the series and it's only the second one so far!
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GoldenRoses717 [2012-01-29 20:42:09 +0000 UTC]
i LOVED THIS SO MUCH AND SHOWED IT TO MY GIRLFRIEND AND SHE LOVED IT TOO!! YOUR AMAZING!
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jenasa [2012-01-21 08:15:42 +0000 UTC]
this is amazing. im falling in love with your characters and writing. If it wasnt so late id stay up and keep reading =]
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