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Description The joy and liveliness that had once filled Canterlot's streets was long gone, replaced with the misery and despair of it's heartbroken citizens, each one tied to the other by thick chains and heavy collars. Guards watched from every corner as they shuffled past, their presence as intimidating as the being they served. If any of them dared to look up, they'd see her, watching over her empire from the perch of large dark crystal growing from center of the Castle's garden. Very little remained of the Princess they once loved, the dark magic of King Sombra having turned Celestia from an adored ruler to a feared tyrant.

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Plot bunny born from talking with and on my last journal. King Sombra was such a weak and useless villain in the actual episode. He had no character and posed little to no threat to the actual Empire. He looked like he could have been a tough baddie, but they didn't do anything with him.

So I decided to try my hand.

The actual idea Dana gave was the fact that it was quite disturbing to see Celestia using the same kind of dark magic that King Sombra used. Why would she be able to use it? So I got to thinking that maybe there was more to the fight with Sombra than Celestia let on.

I'd like to think that Sombra was the type of villain who thought he was all-powerful and could take on anything just because he took over the Crystal Empire. He underestimated the power of the Princesses when they came to overthrow him. In his last moments before being turned to shadow, he tried to curse the Princesses like he did the Empire with the intent to destroy them.

However, their magic was more powerful than his, and his curse rebounded, but he was no longer there so the dark magic latched onto the closest living thing it could find; Princess Celestia. Fearing the damage it could cause if it was let loose, Celestia sealed the magic within herself to protect her subjects.

For a thousand years, the magic has been feeding off Celestia's own magic, gathering strength and waiting for the chance to take control of it's new host. When Celestia used the magic to show Twilight the consequences of what would happen if the Empire was taken over again, the seal was broken. It began to corrupt her heart and her mind until Celestia was taken over by the dark magic, making slaves of her subjects.

This is the first time I've ever drawn a canon character, and it had to be Celestia. OMG, never again. Her wings were a pain in the ass, and her mane and tail about drove me insane. How the fuck does her hair work?!

I'm not quite content with it, but it took me forever to choose the colors, and they turned out better than I thought they would. I've seen a lot of people who've just turned Celestia's eyes green and used the purple mist, but that's it. I thought that was boring so my logic is that the dark magic altered her appearance.

This was such a pain in the ass, my hand has never hurt worse, but I'm happy with it. I'm gonna go write now.

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MLP:FiM, Celestia (c) Lauren Faust
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Comments: 34

eternaldragonstear [2015-04-01 15:29:24 +0000 UTC]

oh I like this content especially of the content of corrupting her heart and mind ^^

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SB64 [2015-03-08 21:10:18 +0000 UTC]

nice

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Flutterbat8889 [2014-08-30 22:31:39 +0000 UTC]

Woah, wut happened to her life?

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UltraJacob2016 [2014-02-25 23:41:16 +0000 UTC]

Me: 0_o, if Twilight and her friends got corrupted too, I'd get the hell outta here.

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candylotmlp [2012-11-12 22:18:40 +0000 UTC]

SO Cool!!!!

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Hezzah-Rae In reply to candylotmlp [2012-11-12 22:23:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. c:

And love your icon.

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candylotmlp In reply to Hezzah-Rae [2012-11-12 22:35:54 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome and thanks.

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Billblok [2012-11-12 21:56:43 +0000 UTC]

Tyrant Celestia: What I see

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Hezzah-Rae In reply to Billblok [2012-11-12 22:06:14 +0000 UTC]

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yodana [2012-11-12 02:47:30 +0000 UTC]

She looks so creepy, Auntie! Great job!

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Hezzah-Rae In reply to yodana [2012-11-12 02:52:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Now to do the story!

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yodana In reply to Hezzah-Rae [2012-11-12 02:56:46 +0000 UTC]

Yaaaaaaaay!!

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Hezzah-Rae In reply to yodana [2012-11-12 03:01:36 +0000 UTC]

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DarthWill3 [2012-11-12 01:43:16 +0000 UTC]

The true face of Princess Celestia...

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Hezzah-Rae In reply to DarthWill3 [2012-11-12 02:30:24 +0000 UTC]

Indeed...

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DarthWill3 In reply to Hezzah-Rae [2012-11-12 02:33:40 +0000 UTC]

Imagine if this what she has been hiding all along.

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Hezzah-Rae In reply to DarthWill3 [2012-11-12 02:40:22 +0000 UTC]

My god...

Well, her sealing off the dark magic in herself is my new headcanon. Sombra was just such a disappoint I'd like to think the majority of his magic is now with Celestia.

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DarthWill3 In reply to Hezzah-Rae [2012-11-12 03:05:18 +0000 UTC]

If you ask me, she was previously Sombra's apprentice... until she plotted against him (typical of the Sith way). Problem was, she only had enough power to banish her. She needed somepony to kill her former master... Somepony with enough power, intelligence, and wisdom. That was where Twilight came in: to finish the job she started. In short, she used her from the very beginning.

Now that Sombra's dead, all of his dark powers are Celestia's.

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Hezzah-Rae In reply to DarthWill3 [2012-11-12 03:20:02 +0000 UTC]

See, that's where I have a problem cause Twilight... I don't hate Twilight, but I don't like her either. She's pretty much a Sue to me. She always has to be right, she's the Princess's favored pupil (though using her as a pawn gives that idea merit now...), her ability is magic and with it she can do just about anything she wants to most of the time without consequence, and it bothers me that she doesn't really have any flaws. I guess it could be that Sombra's dark magic has influenced her over the years in different ways, but for the story to go the way I want it to go, I'm pretty much sticking with the backstory of how she came to be in possession of his magic.

But I do like your idea. When it comes to royalty, there's always corruption somewhere. Different people see it in different ways. c:

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DarthWill3 In reply to Hezzah-Rae [2012-11-12 04:05:55 +0000 UTC]

Perhaps you could do a drawing of where Twilight goes down in tears after realizing who her teacher really is and whimpers: "You used me..." Just a suggestion.

I suppose Celestia betrayed Luna too by secretly corrupting her into becoming Nightmare Moon, banishing her to the moon to mask her true allegiance, and then ruling Equestria all by herself for just a thousand years. True, Luna would come back, but she'll never know the truth about her fall or her big sister... until it's too late.

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AmrasFelagund [2012-11-12 01:15:10 +0000 UTC]

Great what-if scenario that you created here. I'll be anticipating the story to accompany this...!

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Hezzah-Rae In reply to AmrasFelagund [2012-11-12 02:31:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I'll do my best, I have a lot more planned for this, but I want to organize everything first before I start. c:

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PurrElise [2012-11-12 01:05:37 +0000 UTC]

AWESOOOOOOMMMMME!

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Hezzah-Rae In reply to PurrElise [2012-11-12 02:36:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Thejboy88 [2012-11-11 21:47:50 +0000 UTC]

A great what-if story here.

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Hezzah-Rae In reply to Thejboy88 [2012-11-11 21:53:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I'm going to try and write it, but I'm going to plan it out first.

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BeanieNeko [2012-11-11 21:28:36 +0000 UTC]

*grabs and flies away with it* TROLLESTIA! AWAAAY!!!

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Hezzah-Rae In reply to BeanieNeko [2012-11-11 21:30:30 +0000 UTC]

Come back here, ya no good thief! D8< *chases*

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BeanieNeko In reply to Hezzah-Rae [2012-11-11 21:33:27 +0000 UTC]

;A;! FLY TROLLESTIA!
TROLLESTIA! AWAAAY!!!

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Hezzah-Rae In reply to BeanieNeko [2012-11-11 21:34:46 +0000 UTC]

*hops on a griffon* Haha! >8D

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BeanieNeko In reply to Hezzah-Rae [2012-11-11 21:35:47 +0000 UTC]

YOU SHALL NEVER OUTSPEED THE TROLLESTIA!! FLY MY TROLL! FLYYY!!!

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XxRadiancexX In reply to BeanieNeko [2013-08-27 09:41:19 +0000 UTC]

Boo!

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Hezzah-Rae In reply to BeanieNeko [2012-11-11 21:39:40 +0000 UTC]

*flies after*

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FunkyMonkey19 [2012-11-11 20:22:21 +0000 UTC]

Very cool.

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