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HinataOC In reply to DonutSeed [2016-02-09 21:42:32 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!
I really like purple and red together too! I'm really glad you like it too haha
Oh thank you! Once my tablet gets fixed I will be drawing up a storm of all her outfits lol!
I am really excited to draw her Wreck it Ralph one.
I can give you the description of it if you would like. I already posted the chapter where she and Riku go to Wreck it Ralph.
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HinataOC In reply to DonutSeed [2016-02-11 20:49:50 +0000 UTC]
I do too
Oh yay! Well, here is the exact excerpt from the chapter:
"Hinata was clad in dark gray metal armor, hefty but slick and streamlined. The shoulders and chest plate were thick and square, as were her knee-high boots, but the rest seemed to be designed with speed in mind. Long red light strips were tastefully placed along the thighs, upper arms, shoulder pads, and one was cornering the left side of her chest plate. She had a thick helmet on, with glowing red lights running over the top of the helmet and meeting with a red-tinted visor over the top half of her face. On her back was a large gun, a double-barreled beast that seemed that it would laugh in derision at anything that had the misfortune to be aimed in its sights."
It's going to be a challenge drawing it; but I'm really looking forward to it!!
If you are interested, here is the link to the entire chapter: www.fanfiction.net/s/11522025/…
(No pressure to read it, it's really just if you are interested) My husband actually wrote this chapter. He is doing two guest chapters for my story and since his favorite Disney movie is 'Wreck it Ralph' he had Hinata and Riku go there.
Also, side note, Hinata will be headed to Atlantis in the next few chapters. I'm really excited to send her there and I have a lot of fun ideas. Thank you for the outfit and world idea
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HinataOC In reply to DonutSeed [2016-02-14 07:31:12 +0000 UTC]
Oh thank you! It's going to be a challenge, but I'm looking forward to it. My husband came up with the design and in my mind it looks awesome; I just hope I can pull it off right ha-ha!
Well if I ever get back to re-writing True Friends again that might help you out with reading it ha-ha! I have gotten so caught up in writing Third Beginning, my re-write got put on the back burner. My sister was really wanted to read Third Beginning but she couldn't read through True Friends because my writing left a lot to be desired. So I actually went and wrote an abridged version of the first 29 chapters of True Friends. Lessening the story from over 200 pages to only 10. If you would be interested sometime, I could send you the abridged version. It has all the important info from the story and is a lot quicker to read. That way you wouldn't have to read my early on writing that was just plain awful lol
Thank you again for the inspiration! I'm really looking forward to drawing the outfit.
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HinataOC In reply to DonutSeed [2016-02-18 19:54:13 +0000 UTC]
I'm so glad you enjoyed the summary/abridged version!
Oh thank you! I am glad Hinata was on the island before the events of the game. Gave her a chance to connect with the trio.
Yeah, honestly I had never seen The Black Cauldron before writing this story. I was just trying to think of a Disney world that would make sense for Riku to get Soul Eater; so I started watching different Disney movies I knew had swords in it and The Black Cauldron just fit. But I'm sorry it was confusing! It made more sense in the actual full written story; I didn't really follow the movie and made a lot of my own characters.
Ahaha I'm really glad you thought that part was cute! There are actually a few more kissing scenes in the story that I just didn't add to the abridged version.
I hope you do sometime! (take your time, I don't mean to rush you at all) Now you will be able to read the rest in actual story form rather than in summary. haha! The summary went up to chapter 29, so there are only 10 more chapters of the story. They are relatively short too, like all less than 5,000 words each (I'm pretty sure)
Thank you again for reading the summary! It really means a lot to me and I hope you don't feel like I'm pressuring you to read it.
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DonutSeed In reply to HinataOC [2016-02-20 17:26:56 +0000 UTC]
I definitely did!
Oh yeah, I can just imagine her having had a special connection with all of them, and I really like that (It's making me think back to that time where she said that Sora would always share his mothers homemade cookies with all of them, and just thinking how sweet that would've been haha).
Ahhh okay, I gotcha. I recognized a few of the names like Taran, Eilonwy and The Horned King, but everything else definitely wasn't familiar to me haha. But I really like the story of how he acquired Soul Eater, I thought that was really cool
Ahh okay, well I'm glad you included a few cute fluffy moments in the summary
Okay, I definitely plan too! I have the original story on fanfiction saved so I can start reading the last ten chapters sometime later on! I'll be sure to tell you what I think as soon as I get around to reading and finishing it up!
You're very welcome! Ah, it doesn't feel like you're pressuring me! I will definitely read it as soon as I can!( just so long as your okay with it taking a little bit haha).
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HinataOC In reply to DonutSeed [2016-02-20 21:38:06 +0000 UTC]
Oh yay! Haha yeah, Saki makes some pretty delicious cookies haha
Thanks! I hear a lot of theories that Maleficent gave Soul Eater to Riku; but in my opinion that never really makes sense. Especially how he keeps the weapon even after he realizes that Maleficent was manipulating him and his friends. I don't know, I just wanted to come up with something different haha
Haha I'm really glad you like the cute fluffy moments. They definitely have a lot of them.
OH yay! I'm really excited to hear what you think!
Oh good, I get worried that I get overbearing. And take as long as you need. I totally get being busy and not having much time to read.
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KaiCabin3 [2016-02-05 19:45:18 +0000 UTC]
Oh ya!!! She looks totally awesome!!^-^ She looks so fierce!
Oh my gosh!!! I can't wait to see her Wreck-it-ralph outfit!!^-^ Like oh my goodness! I'm so excited! I bet all of them are going to look amazing!
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KenjiSato [2016-02-03 07:03:09 +0000 UTC]
Looks awesome!!Nice body posture.Great work!!
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HinataOC In reply to KenjiSato [2016-02-03 07:18:05 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!
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HinataOC In reply to SpiritDreamWariors [2016-02-02 22:23:17 +0000 UTC]
Lol! No wonder Riku had a hard time paying attention when he first saw her!
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SpiritDreamWariors In reply to HinataOC [2016-02-02 22:35:36 +0000 UTC]
Lol!!! That is so true, gland that Hinata becoming more stronger then last story. I bet Akira would be a bit jealous that she getting attention from Riku.
Akira: Hey!
Spirit: XD
Akira:
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HinataOC In reply to SpiritDreamWariors [2016-02-02 22:39:31 +0000 UTC]
Oh me too! It's nice to finally write her being able to hold her own haha! True Friends was basically her fumbling around trying to figure out where she was supposed to be. This time around she's finally getting the chance to be a bad ass.
Lol Oh sorry Akira XD
You'll get your chance!
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Vectony [2016-02-02 22:06:40 +0000 UTC]
Very well done..The eyes are nice and detailed as always and the model Is nearly perfect..Keep it up...Youre art progress has been impressive.
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HinataOC In reply to Vectony [2016-02-02 22:09:14 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! That means a lot. I've really been practicing with anatomy and trying to get it down. It's amazing how tough it is haha!
I'm really glad you think I've been improving! I try to practice everyday.
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Vectony In reply to HinataOC [2016-02-02 22:16:52 +0000 UTC]
Yeah...so true..And it gets even more difficult when you have to draw different angles..heh
Do you you a reference? Just wondering.
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HinataOC In reply to Vectony [2016-02-02 22:22:19 +0000 UTC]
It really does!
With this particular one I did. I have a hard time figuring out sitting positions and I want to get better at them. So on my other computer monitor I put up a bare pose sketch of a girl sitting in the above position and tried to draw it on my other screen haha.
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Zezora [2016-02-02 22:03:41 +0000 UTC]
wow!! nice job ^w^ love the shading
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HinataOC In reply to Zezora [2016-02-02 22:04:26 +0000 UTC]
Oh thank you so much! :3
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