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Published: 2007-09-22 07:12:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 1142; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 58
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I have finalized it. This is the completed version. I encourage advanced critique for this one so my later deviations will contain fewer flaws.Related content
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Ooh I like it a lot, the only thing I noticed that the stars kinda appear to be like dots- I think to some (not all) you should add a little more shine to them, and maybe even by making others a little bigger so that they're not all the same size (even though they aren't, but some do appear so)
ahaha that's my very brutal/advanced critique for ya.
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other than that this is great! I had no idea you did things like this. This reminds me of all that wallpaper type stuff on that blasphemy website you guys once showed me.
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Hey all!
Just updated this deviation. As is apparant right away for the previous viewers, I have added a large star in the top-left corner and a black hole into the blue nebula. I also deleted the antialiasing trail I left behind on the last deviation. Lastly, I made the auroras a tad brighter.
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Hello there! This is an interesting attempt and I find it to my liking, although there are some things I could recommend you on that:
1) There are two lines at the top of the pictures formed by a group of stars, try to erase them with PS on a low opacity brush.
2) I guess the cloudy nebula needs a bit bigger fade into the environment, try to play with the layer modes in PS.
3) The clouds on the lower part look a bit flat, I guess you haven't checked the 3d mark in terragen.
4) A bit about the composition - it does look good, but the upper left part of the picture seems rather empty.. I guess it needs something to balance it a bit.
I am not quite sure if you use terragen or photoshop, it just looks like that. Good luck on this, it has the potential to be a very-very good-looking terraspace
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Thanks for your input. I do appreciate it.
I do use Terragen and Photoshop though in this I only used Photoshop to create the planet on the right. For the most part, I use Paint.NET.
Terragen is only the trial version so I'm very limited with what I can do (3d is not an option for me).
I'll take care of the line of "stars" at the top. That is actually the remainder of some antialiasing I did when combining layers. I guess I missed that.
I'll try to add a little somethin' to the top-left.
I cannot really do anything to the nebulae anymore. I accidentally saved the PDN file while the layers were combined.
Other than that I can only add a few more things or this might get too crowded.
Once again, thank you.
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