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Published: 2006-01-03 04:39:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 1483; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 118
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Description Oh, I somehow like the idea behind this! The one reason is probably because I wanted to realize it already since summer 2004 and only recently got one of my models to actually do this. At least I had time enough to think it over. The second reason is because it's just so damn cool polar: the basic idea behind it is actually that of a couple where the guy brings her roses, but she hates him, so she just rips the poor roses' heads off. So if you wonder what she holds in her right hand - it's the stem of the rose. (I wasn't sure if I shouldn't make it lighter for clarity's sake, but in the end I left the lightning as it is) Why she hates him is not important. But it is not really serious, it is rather funny and ironic at the same time. A well done serious farce, as you would say. Well I must say - we had our fun while shooting it. ^^ The year's time gave me a pretty clear idea about how I wanted it. The grungy and grainy walls, the falling petals, the vulgar contrast and first of all the green color - most of it was done already while shooting, so I didn't have to edit it much. It took about 30-40 hits though, because we just couldn't make the petals fall right. And guess what? In the end we chose the very first picture of all. u.u' Now that's just like me. But her face expression makes me both giggle and hate the guy with the roses at once.
About the editing: I pushed the contrast and shadows somewhat further and I had to increase the size of the walls, because it looked too caged. I still would have the walls spacier, but I don't want to edit my photos that much. n.n And the petals look really poorly edited, I agree with that. But they were just so hard to see, and I wanted them to stand out a bit more. And there is also some amateur brushing on the walls... I know, it looks quite amateur-done, but at least the intention was professional *lol*
We (the precious model) thought about including a guy crowling somewhere in the picture, but I think it is better without it. What do you think? Also the noise in the photo is a chapter for itself... originally there was some noise from the beginning, so I had to rather remove it from the model's skin, but then I thought I could feed the walls somewhat more. So on one hand I decreased it and on the other I have raised the amount of noise. I wonder if it has a bad effect on the picture.
Oh yeah, one more: I'm not sure if Glamour is the right section for this one. Anyone some other ideas? Maybe Miscellaneous. Because I am tired of submitting to the Emotive Portraits one...
Feedback DEMANDED!

(taken with my good ol' OLYMPUS C-745UZ [slightly showing signs of approaching death, though], several different light sources used)
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Comments: 15

Cinderbela [2009-02-09 16:11:43 +0000 UTC]

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hyro1 In reply to Cinderbela [2009-02-09 16:58:20 +0000 UTC]


Thank you.

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Cinderbela In reply to hyro1 [2009-02-09 17:43:11 +0000 UTC]

your welcome ^^

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sa-cool [2007-04-26 00:14:52 +0000 UTC]

amazing !!

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supdeleter [2006-07-10 02:10:40 +0000 UTC]

hey- my name is kathy.
i really enjoy this peice. the background blue is very very rich. i think the brushing of the walls and the contrast shadows thing was a very good choice. her expression seems somewhat humorous rather than hate. and i do do do love the rose in mid air, i'm sure it was a feat to get it just right.

-kathy

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glitterdarkstar [2006-01-17 14:42:18 +0000 UTC]

but I love this pic

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Iliuthenin [2006-01-08 11:13:32 +0000 UTC]

Colors are nice and so is the pose. Composition balanced. I think you did pretty good job with this one.

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DizyDezi [2006-01-06 03:48:54 +0000 UTC]

love the colors

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hasanizm [2006-01-03 11:06:04 +0000 UTC]

yess friend this is very nice...good light...waiting for new works..; )..

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chinks [2006-01-03 05:15:08 +0000 UTC]

I like the colours and the concept but as jenzycat says its tricky to make out the rose without reading the description first. Can't think of a way to highlight the rose without making it look out of place unless you change the dress colour to help the stem stand out but that would put the black area in the bottom all out, anyway nice concept and description.

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jenzycat [2006-01-03 04:47:04 +0000 UTC]

I like your concept--it made me laugh! As far as my critique goes, it's not quite self-explanatory. I was thinking maybe you could have a panel of three close-u images going down the right hand side: the first shot being of her hand with the petals falling, the second (middle) shot being of a ring (engagement/class ring?) in a puddle on the floor, or partially under her foot, and the last bottom shot being of the petal-less rose-stem. Whatcha think? It might explain your story a little more for you.
It's still a really cool classy picture, though

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jenzycat In reply to jenzycat [2006-01-03 04:48:14 +0000 UTC]

Uh..haha. I meant the picture is not quite self-explaitory--not my critique! Heh, heh. I think I was a little over explanitory with my critique... (grin)
I'm long-winded...

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hyro1 In reply to jenzycat [2006-01-03 04:52:47 +0000 UTC]

aah, I understand what you mean. Yeah, noone will get what it is about except he reads the comment. Unfortunately it is already too late XD

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jenzycat In reply to hyro1 [2006-01-03 18:20:37 +0000 UTC]

(Snicker) I think I shall go blush, now.

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