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Published: 2004-04-04 12:26:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 565; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 149
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artist's comments:
Do you think I should take the eyes and\or the nose down, or should I leave as it is?
(I'm talking about the figure on the left of course).
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Comments: 32

morduk [2004-04-10 11:43:16 +0000 UTC]

Man it's awsome but the url is without the www.
you need to write it like [link] and then israel.deviant... d'ya get me?
besides that cause it's awsome!

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morduk In reply to morduk [2004-04-10 11:44:27 +0000 UTC]

shit!! what I ment is...
you need to write h-t-t-p-:-/-/-israel.deviant....

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morduk In reply to morduk [2004-04-10 11:44:49 +0000 UTC]

without the www.

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croovman In reply to morduk [2004-04-10 13:04:18 +0000 UTC]

People keep saying that, but it also works if you try it on your browser, and it looks more offical.
Thanks for the fav man!

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comoda [2004-04-07 11:27:24 +0000 UTC]

looking good, but i think it's already a bit morbid as it is... leaving a blank face will only add to morbid factor.

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croovman In reply to comoda [2004-04-10 14:06:11 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. *sigh*
Thanks for the review : )

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neonpaledead [2004-04-06 19:17:11 +0000 UTC]

I think that if you wanna be minimalistic, You should leave only the Jaw-line, But this is my opinion...
Good work, anyway!

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croovman In reply to neonpaledead [2004-04-10 14:02:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the comment,
that's a good idea.

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r-f [2004-04-05 13:23:52 +0000 UTC]

cool design :thumgsup:

àäáúé ...

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croovman In reply to r-f [2004-04-10 14:06:49 +0000 UTC]

heh, thanks

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Yasmin [2004-04-04 22:53:05 +0000 UTC]

...îãìé÷. àäáúé àú äãîåú îùîàì

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thejoshuaproject [2004-04-04 17:58:15 +0000 UTC]

oh man that is so friggin sweet! im gonna print it and put it on my door.

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croovman In reply to thejoshuaproject [2004-04-04 22:46:36 +0000 UTC]

As long as it's a quality door.
I'm jus' kiddin withya, that'll be awesome.
As long as you didn't just said that, and you were serious.
Anyways, thank you so much!

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varona [2004-04-04 17:55:08 +0000 UTC]

nice design, good job i love the sketchy look of the magen david :3

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croovman In reply to varona [2004-04-04 22:36:12 +0000 UTC]

thanks alot : )

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varona In reply to croovman [2004-04-04 22:37:45 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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miss-shroom [2004-04-04 16:49:48 +0000 UTC]

i like it...though i think it might be abit too messy! i like how it looks "graphitti" like. but abit clearing up will do it nothing but good!

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croovman In reply to miss-shroom [2004-04-04 22:19:35 +0000 UTC]

Some one just told me the complete opposite; that I should add more *sigh*
By the way, the griffiti lookin things are made from photos of water splashing, rough pencil storkes, my shirt, and my eye.
I just gave you some pretty much useless information, but I'm sure you'd find a way to make millions off of it, and when you'll do, don't forget who helped you out, k? k.

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juangriego [2004-04-04 15:22:12 +0000 UTC]

GReat Sticker congratulations to the artist

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croovman In reply to juangriego [2004-04-04 16:20:42 +0000 UTC]

Aye, thanks!

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Shadow96 [2004-04-04 14:46:23 +0000 UTC]

hmm..

BG looks good..., the pixel effect fits well..

the figure should be only as an outlined filled shape... with no details inside, except for the star of david...

good work, keep it up

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croovman In reply to Shadow96 [2004-04-04 16:19:16 +0000 UTC]

ahh, thanks alot!
I was trying to make the figure more realistic then the white lines inside it, I think it's a cool concept.

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Shadow96 In reply to croovman [2004-04-04 17:15:34 +0000 UTC]

drop the realistic bit...

just go with a plain filled contour figure...

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croovman In reply to Shadow96 [2004-04-04 21:52:23 +0000 UTC]

I meant more realistic then the lines inside.. I didn't say it was realistic, but merely just more then the lines.. this is as realistic as it gets : ))
take care

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bluem00n [2004-04-04 14:18:17 +0000 UTC]

äòéðééí åäàó îîù îéåúøéí. äí ìà îåñéôéí ëìåí, åàôéìå âåøòéí îäúîåðä. âí äàåæï, àðé çåùáú, öøéëä ìòìåú ÷öú ìîèä, åäéà èéôä éåúø îãé âãåìä.

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croovman In reply to bluem00n [2004-04-04 16:11:54 +0000 UTC]

I'll tell you what my dilemma is, it will make it look less personal, won't you agree? It does look cooler without the eyes and nose, but kinda makes it look like a gimmick.
And as for the ear, I know it's disproportional, all the other parts of the figure is too, but I don't see why this is a bad thing, it doesn't suppose to be realistic.
It's pretty important for me to get this one right, so please respond.

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bluem00n In reply to croovman [2004-04-04 16:23:37 +0000 UTC]

Sure I'll respond I tend to finish my business, in every aspect..

Look at it my way, it really bothered me. I'm not obsessed with astethics (well, occasinally), and if it bothered me, it means something. Of course, it's your creation, and you should do what your heart tells you to do with it, but as someone from the outside I see it objectively.

As for the details - the eyes and the nose - I would strongly advise you to erase them. I think that the ear makes up for their loss, and that the character wouldn't lose anything from it's personal touch. I really don't feel it could be anything like a gimmick anyway.

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croovman In reply to bluem00n [2004-04-04 21:45:23 +0000 UTC]

Heh, well, the way I see it, I have tons of reasons to erase them and not to erase them.. so this is what I think I'm gonna do- I'll ask the admin to post a version without the face here, and I'll have the on my page still up, so I'll have both online.
Seems like the right way for an unsetteled guy like me, ney?

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bluem00n In reply to croovman [2004-04-04 23:06:00 +0000 UTC]

Sure

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bnext [2004-04-04 14:00:02 +0000 UTC]

àðçðå òì äîôä åðùàø òì äîôä!!

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croovman In reply to bnext [2004-04-04 15:42:31 +0000 UTC]

And not only in sports but in everything!
hahaha.

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bnext In reply to croovman [2004-04-04 15:44:16 +0000 UTC]

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