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Published: 2010-07-11 03:58:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 41027; Favourites: 1053; Downloads: 268
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I wondered if you could hear my heart in your sleep,Recognize the smell of my skin in your dreams,
Touch my lips when you wake up,
And whisper in my ears while I sleep.
I pondered all that as you fell asleep to my heartbeat,
Breathing softly on my chest with one of your hands still feeling me.
And when I wake up it was your lips,
Or maybe it's all just a dream.
But when I declared "I love you",
I could feel your lips at my ear,
Whispering the sweet melody,
Of everything I ever wanted to hear.
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<3 This is how I feel about someone very close to me. π: 2 β©: 0
I love this... Kinda wanna share this with my boyfriend, but I don't want to bombard him with things... Β However, I want to make sure he remembers I love him.
Love is.... Beautiful and harsh, the way it can send you flying high as the sky, only to crash in a moments distraction... Β I love this because I fall asleep to my boyfriends heartbeat, his smell surrounding me... And his lips in the morning... Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you for sharing these beautiful words 
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I only wish my day was going as well as yours.
My guy and I have been having issues
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I just wanted to share with you and others that view your deviation that it's being featured here!
First Literature Feature!Β
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I never do literature features as I don't know much about literature/poetry/etc so here
are some that I found through *PurpleInk777 and some just searching through DA
Hope you enjoy them!
Take Care!
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Thank you 
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I'm happy you liked it
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Thank you for taking your time in leaving this sweet feedback
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Oh this is beautiful!
To me it's relishing the time you have with someone, lying together perhaps as you fall asleep.
And it's so wonderful, you wonder if it's real.
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Thank you! Thanks for taking your time in leaving such a wonderful feedback!
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Oh it's not a problem, I quite enjoyed this piece, and I'll be snooping around the rest of your gallery
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No problem, you deserve all positive feedback in the world! I really admire you, I wish that I could be such a fantastic writer as yourself!
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I'm not so sure about that, but thx for believing in me anyway!
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If only you've read my earliest attempts at poetry
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Well, I'm not sure I have really, but I'm certain that those are still better than the ones I would write if I gave it a shot!
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Practice makes perfect in anything and everything we can do given enough effort
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Well, yes, of course you're right about that
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Well, thanks for the kind words that made me do this
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Thank you for the wonderful feedback!
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seriously it touches my heart
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*smiles* Thank you for taking your time in leaving this feedback
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