Comments: 195
elis1713 [2018-12-09 10:08:46 +0000 UTC]
This is one of the best things I've ever read (I hope I wrote it correctly).
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
AlicheSama [2018-10-07 04:17:04 +0000 UTC]
286yoha
"To love is to break the fourth wall."
Beautifully written, btw!
👍: 1 ⏩: 0
coyotemissy [2018-10-02 10:15:15 +0000 UTC]
Nicely done. beautiful
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Shmaqzi-does-art [2017-12-11 05:37:17 +0000 UTC]
"They have many faults, but you're blind to them" That is not a good way to see someone you love, to love someone you must accept their flaws and faults, not ignore them.
"You would take them back, no matter what they do" That also not a good mentality because it show obsession which can be harmful, and if perhaps the person they love has dome something wrong to them or others then they would be putting themselves in harms way
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
kittenroseabby [2016-02-25 00:24:47 +0000 UTC]
Heartbreakingly accurate.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
average-wierdo [2014-04-10 11:35:07 +0000 UTC]
you got it spot on
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
EatherEternal [2013-10-18 23:04:12 +0000 UTC]
you are so frickin right, thank you for putting it in beautiful words
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
f0xal1ve [2013-03-30 05:58:33 +0000 UTC]
Wow.... I searched love in the search bar because I am looking for the words to describe how I feel right now. I have a girl I love so much. I want to take her pain, I want to always be there for her, I am so happy when I am with her. This poem captures exactly what I am feeling. I am adding this to favorites because it touched me and my situation. Great work.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Libertades [2013-02-24 03:03:44 +0000 UTC]
Every single word, is true.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
CapriciousLife [2013-02-06 03:49:20 +0000 UTC]
Well I call all of the above for my crush :/ true shiz dat is, btw awsome stuff.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Minthuu [2012-12-28 09:20:31 +0000 UTC]
And I agree. That...... it's very beautiful. And very sweet.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
bakuragirl257 [2012-12-04 17:34:08 +0000 UTC]
this is the way i feel about my girlfriend
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Psycho-wolf131 [2012-11-17 22:50:29 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Kkmouse943 [2012-11-16 14:26:09 +0000 UTC]
Hi, i hope you don't mind if i use your poem for my school project, i will credit you. It's an awesome poem, i know exactly how you feel.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
KikiValentine [2012-10-15 23:01:31 +0000 UTC]
just...so real... <3
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
JChairez [2012-09-16 03:53:03 +0000 UTC]
This is exactly the way I feel about my ex. I'm sure he didn't love me as much as I love him but i still want the best for him, even if it means me having a broken heart.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
wickitjester [2012-09-05 01:30:15 +0000 UTC]
Amazing, and I simply love it.
I was wondering if I could include it in a short story?
Of course all credit will be given to it's writer.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
blooddept [2012-05-29 07:48:55 +0000 UTC]
is it bad that i still feel this way despite it being impossible
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
avrillavignefanchic [2012-05-25 02:08:11 +0000 UTC]
This is how I feel about the guy I love.. I'm sure he doesn't love me the same way because he has a girlfriend but I can't help but love him...
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
EnclaveMaven In reply to avrillavignefanchic [2016-04-16 14:45:04 +0000 UTC]
Don't... worry... he'll soon see it, true love is always meant to happen... and I believe you and your crush has the true love... give it time...
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
lizzyduhh [2012-03-08 16:23:45 +0000 UTC]
perfectly put
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
PanicsShadow [2012-02-26 08:05:57 +0000 UTC]
wow.this is amazing!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Masterofsin666 [2012-02-14 02:17:13 +0000 UTC]
Thank you this poem show how I feel for my best friend but at the moment I'm having troubles telling her how I feel.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
happykt [2012-02-11 04:00:14 +0000 UTC]
so true!!!!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
PaintIngMANiAC [2012-02-02 01:30:40 +0000 UTC]
This is wonderful, I felt a sense of relief as I read through this. More than anything I have felt last year, this is how I feel this year about my friend, he is so dear to me and I could never describe how I feel about him without drawing blanks or sounding dumb hahaha! Thankyou for writing this it's lovely
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
LavaDino [2012-01-12 01:51:48 +0000 UTC]
This is exactly how I feel.. I love it.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
avidec [2012-01-01 20:05:15 +0000 UTC]
Perfect.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
griever8 [2012-01-01 18:22:33 +0000 UTC]
That was awesome. Seriously, I have no words :')
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
iloveyoumango [2011-11-22 04:19:41 +0000 UTC]
true that true that
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
krysta1992 [2011-11-13 08:52:44 +0000 UTC]
OMG I love this this literally is how I feel about someone like dead on thank u so much 4 writing it its great!!!!!!!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
FitzAnderson In reply to masayalover78 [2018-01-03 12:36:33 +0000 UTC]
The question you need to ask yourself is why you love him if he ignores you and hates you like that. Just make sure it is worth it or else you’ll be missing out on meeting others if you keep chasing him.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
JackieRB2007 [2011-10-22 06:57:10 +0000 UTC]
I cried the whole time I read this... It says everything I feel for my ex... I want him back so much it kills me and this says everything I feel for him and much much more... Just amazing.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Clayton67 [2011-09-04 15:51:55 +0000 UTC]
it is the best way
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
FreakieGeekie [2011-09-01 09:36:36 +0000 UTC]
This is true.
And it's scary as hell.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
sea2sea [2011-08-09 05:46:28 +0000 UTC]
I feel a bit like this with several people, but I'm not in love with any of them. I care deeply about them.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
DCSP [2011-07-27 11:52:15 +0000 UTC]
I agree 1000%, this piece makes me feel human, and it is also very true where, we're happy that we've found one person to love ^^
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
| Next =>