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Published: 2006-11-21 21:18:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 861; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 10
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these are three pages tests for Marvel comics. In this work I made the pencil and the inker.Related content
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the top panel makes me happy inside. I blame that wondrous expression~
awesome job with the perspective on these test pages!
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Storm has the best ass EVER. I would pay VERY good money for an issue that looks like these. My one suggestions to you is not to go so heavy on all the blacks if you're going to pencil for a color comic and be mindful of your compositions when using said heavy blacks. When you have Storm overlaping the Sentinel and both are heavily inked, they become hard to seperate visually.
Similarly, in the second page with your second panel of Collossus you have this wide shot with lots and lots of detail. Too much. Color would certainly help with that, but in the b&w's it's too busy and the eye isn't drawn to what the big C is doing.
In comics, I've noticed, blacks aren't just a method of rendering, but a powerful design tool. Since, often enough, a colorist will be working over your pencils/inks, it's important to use blacks more decisively to create focal points and depth of field rather than completely render the piece.
Fine fine work here. This beats the living crap out of comics I read lately. High action, great angles, classic butt kicking in true superheroic fashion!
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wow, the sense of depth and the dynamic action in this page are awesome!!!!
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Again beautiful details! However i kind of loose what is going on in the main panel. I think the blacks need better placement or something. So are you working cuz i think you definately have the skilz bro!! If you are let me know what your working on so i can go check it out alright!?
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That is some boss work mate. Excellent job!
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Thank you buddy!!!!
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I always liked Storm's original outfit since it makes look sexy, anyway nice job.
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