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JBHP — Let's Try. by-nc-nd
Published: 2007-06-04 15:46:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 127; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description Let's try.
This time.
To really say goodbye.
I know I have pushed too much on you already.
The burden of being my friend.
The burden of knowing.
I have deep and forever feelings for you.
But you will never understand.
How I feel because you wont take the time.
So,
Let's try and say goodbye.
For I may cry.
Maybe my soul will die.
But it is now or never.
So pick.
I know deep down what your answer is.
You want to try.
Your just too shy.
So now I say Goodbye.
You know,
I will always love you.
The pain.
It's still too hard for me to bare.
Now,
Once and for all I say.
Goodbye.
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Comments: 5

Shishka0441 [2007-08-01 20:02:40 +0000 UTC]

great rythem, powerful message. well done

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JBHP In reply to Shishka0441 [2007-08-02 00:18:44 +0000 UTC]

<33

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Shishka0441 In reply to JBHP [2007-08-02 00:23:47 +0000 UTC]

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omnipotent-lion [2007-06-04 21:32:39 +0000 UTC]

I like it. Very nice rhyme scheme. Also very familiar topic, alas...

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JBHP In reply to omnipotent-lion [2007-06-05 00:00:44 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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