Comments: 5
BobThePeanut [2018-06-12 19:49:36 +0000 UTC]
Nice story! I enjoyed the descriptions a lot - the way you described the taur transformation and the head growing were interesting and different from anything I've read before. Another thing I liked was the way the narrative reflected the character's thoughts and opinions - since it was first person, haha. But it's always nice when all the words reflect thoughts and such. So I'd say you did a good job!
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DarkwingDork1 [2018-03-04 10:13:28 +0000 UTC]
So is the tail head deliberately trying to transform her, or is it just thirsty and mindlessly drinking anything in reach, consequences be damned?
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human72 [2016-09-24 05:17:04 +0000 UTC]
intresting
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Jesoran In reply to human72 [2016-09-27 01:20:05 +0000 UTC]
Hee hee~ Quite a situation she's now in!
Anything in particular stand out for you, if I may ask? Or just, the whole thing you found to be rather interesting?
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human72 In reply to Jesoran [2016-09-27 14:27:39 +0000 UTC]
whole thing.
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