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emballer [2007-08-06 05:23:32 +0000 UTC]

Great job... I love the detail on the outfit...im addicted to this gametoo.

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ShadowsAndLight [2006-10-01 05:01:19 +0000 UTC]

That is just so cute. Adorable. I love it.

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senez [2005-02-01 03:04:09 +0000 UTC]

Archers are my fav class in fft [well actually summoners too] but the archers abilities suck...
quite sad really
But i like the pic

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Arleen [2005-01-07 10:25:46 +0000 UTC]

It's really cute. The lineas are perfect.

Congrats. ^^

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OnaK [2004-11-16 04:27:51 +0000 UTC]

GRRRRRRRREAT!!!! I love archers-........ defnitivamente un +fav

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mojaam [2004-10-28 21:24:24 +0000 UTC]

Nice drawing . Love the clothing, defintately says FF.

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luffie [2004-10-09 12:28:22 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, me never play FF tactics...(DMD eats my time....), but that's a nice design n pose. Might look better if colored

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froggiechan [2004-09-27 09:57:29 +0000 UTC]

Cute! My piece of critic would be... er... (seems everybody has better eyes than I am... XD)

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cheeks-74 [2004-09-27 03:19:49 +0000 UTC]

nicely done! i especially like the weapon

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PhoenixZydeco [2004-09-25 22:18:46 +0000 UTC]

*ahem* This rocks. Bullseye with the line art. Gwha. Yes, I did just say that. Bullseye. Wow.

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Steph-Laberis [2004-09-25 15:25:42 +0000 UTC]

Aside from some small issues with the foot (lil small, perspective a little wonky) this is an appealing character design. Very nice!

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basakward [2004-09-25 07:55:59 +0000 UTC]

Very cute! Love the lineweight mostly, and the idle hand for some reason.. Looks great!

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ennia [2004-09-25 07:44:23 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm...some critque hey? Don't hate me for this, but there's something about her right arm that looks a bit off. Like it's in the wrong position or someting. That could be stronger. The thumb could be in front of the bow- but you know that already. Otherwise, I think it looks great! Looking forward to seeing it in full colour.

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wredwrat [2004-09-25 07:43:27 +0000 UTC]

Nice!! Only a couple of things, her arrows look a bit strange, the ones poking out from the quiver. They look a bit broken nya, the angle that some of them are poking out? And the other end of her bow appears to be missing.
I like her though, she looks like a cool hunter! ^__^ Nice to see new art from you again, what with your crazy work schedule and all. @__@

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MysticFaerie [2004-09-25 05:36:17 +0000 UTC]

Very cute! I love her outfit and the hair.

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kian02 [2004-09-24 19:09:01 +0000 UTC]

em.. nice one, some commence on the anatomy/pose:
- the left hand palm... the thumb maybe should shifted lower a bit??
- the pose might looks better with the left leg slanted in a bit more... haha

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makani [2004-09-24 16:55:01 +0000 UTC]

omg awesome details on the clothes n stuff 8D! and i like how you drew her left hand *thinks* hmm i think the way you have her hips turned.. it looks like she's jumping backwards.. like, i think what i'm trying to say is the hip that's closest to us with the foot going out needs to be rotated forward and the hip farthest from us needs to rotate backwards.. cause right now the top half of her body is heading more to our left than the bottom half . and then i second what psychedelicmind said about the foot in front . it's at a pretty extreme vertical angle right now. anyway...^w^ i love your style tho.. and THAT BOWSTAFF thingy is teh shiz.

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guyuman [2004-09-24 16:45:57 +0000 UTC]

psyche has said the main things that i have not highlighted to u. sound advice ne~

Dun get SO ENGROSSED YOU RABID FFT fangirl! haha, but glad u are feeling relax.

And do keep in touch ne! haha, can't even find u on MSN anymore

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D3-Tr0p [2004-09-24 16:33:01 +0000 UTC]

i notice a very tiny detail that u might haf missed.. some of d arrows seems to b positioned as if its protruding out of its holster or wtv u call that... check on the angles.. n i suppose the arrows should b more or less parallel to each other... not protruding out frm juz abt anwhere inside the holster. n the strap of d holster doesnt seem to b resting on the chest.. kinda flat no? it might juz need a slight curve showing the natural body curve..
left arm looks a lil bit longer than it should b? or issit juz my feeling..

overall nice stuff... Y DIDNT U SEND MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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PsychedelicMind [2004-09-24 16:08:36 +0000 UTC]

^.^ thats very purtty pyo~ u gonna color her? *say yes say yes say yes* XD
i love ur line work cookie~ X3 its very lively (especially her hair!) and filled wif action X3
mmm the little crits i can think of are:

the right hand would look more natural with her thumb overlapping her fingers (as in a fist).
her left hand seems positioned at an odd angle, but i like how you drew it very much X3 the form is very nice~
her left foot can be tilted a bit more towards us. now she looks like she's toe-ing inwards. feels a bit strange.
And Her left eye looks a little too near the side of her face. can move it a bit closer to her nose.

XD nya~ hope it helped~!

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DimiraGurl [2004-09-24 15:56:42 +0000 UTC]

that's is so pretty I like it alot...:fave:

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Atoryga [2004-09-24 15:34:59 +0000 UTC]

I love the clothes and details but the hands seem somewhat uncomfortable..... The Right thumb would probably be in front of the bow and the left arm seems somewhat tense.

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ketchup-suicide [2004-09-24 15:34:04 +0000 UTC]

ahht thats reallly nice ..looks great and so cute ^__^
I'm glad you didn't color this cuz it has a good effect as it is nice and simple
and i dont think you slacked your standard

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