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Joanne-Goulty-Cullen — You, my dear
Published: 2011-12-24 22:09:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 518; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 5
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Description You, my dear, are beautiful.
Your eyes are a myriad of colours,
That I can simply melt into.
Just stare into their endless depths,
While they pierce straight through to my core.
Your gaze can do things to me,
That I never thought possible.
Your eyes on my body,
Makes me feel simply beautiful.

Your hair is flowing gold,
So incredibly delicate and precious.
I want to reach out and touch it,
Run my fingers through the strands,
Feel the liquid metal seep through my grasp.

And that smile.
Damn girl, that smile is incredible.
It sends a shiver down my smile,
While making the whole room glow.
I can't help but return the gesture,
Yours just radiates happiness.
When you turn that smile towards me,
I can feel all my coherent thoughts
Slowly
      Slipping
               Away.
And I don't even care.

Your laughter is so infectious,
It always brings a smile to my face.
I never knew you'd have such an effect on me,
You just make me feel good about myself.
When I'm around you I feel happy,
There's not a care in the world.
I can be myself,
My true self,
The person that is rarely seen by others.
You make me comfortable around myself,
And that is quite a feat.

You, my dear, are incredible.
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Comments: 14

Shadowsbeloved [2011-12-30 12:58:01 +0000 UTC]

I love it! I can't even explain why, I just do!

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Joanne-Goulty-Cullen In reply to Shadowsbeloved [2011-12-30 13:35:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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Shadowsbeloved In reply to Joanne-Goulty-Cullen [2011-12-30 13:38:47 +0000 UTC]

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simplyfeel [2011-12-29 08:13:45 +0000 UTC]

This is cute, but not annoyingly so! Hard to find a positive romantic poem like that. Good job! Did you write this for someone?

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Joanne-Goulty-Cullen In reply to simplyfeel [2011-12-29 14:06:54 +0000 UTC]

Oh, thank you so much! And yes, yes I did

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simplyfeel In reply to Joanne-Goulty-Cullen [2011-12-30 01:38:17 +0000 UTC]

I bet they were exceptionally flattered and possibly wanted to make out with you on the spot. Am I right?

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Joanne-Goulty-Cullen In reply to simplyfeel [2011-12-30 13:37:22 +0000 UTC]

Flattered, yes; make out with me? I'm afraid not

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Shoujo-Slytherin [2011-12-29 01:26:07 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful.

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Joanne-Goulty-Cullen In reply to Shoujo-Slytherin [2011-12-29 14:06:21 +0000 UTC]

Oh my, thank you!

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Shoujo-Slytherin In reply to Joanne-Goulty-Cullen [2011-12-30 00:16:22 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Proud2BeUs [2011-12-28 16:28:28 +0000 UTC]

Aww, simply lovely!

~Sophia

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Joanne-Goulty-Cullen In reply to Proud2BeUs [2011-12-28 20:12:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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mango-cupcake [2011-12-28 15:21:43 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful.

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Joanne-Goulty-Cullen In reply to mango-cupcake [2011-12-28 20:12:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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