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JoHnnY8901 — First Interior scene
Published: 2011-06-20 20:59:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 2816; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 96
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hello everybody!I finally finished my first interior scene.... Im so fucking happy with the final result
i was working in this since last week and I put much effort to make it look good! i hope u like it and please tell me what u think C&C are very welcome! 
All modelled by me except: plants, lamp, and books...
75 custom textures made by me except: lamp
Rendered in cinema 4D AR3
Postwork always Photoshop
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Apart from the rug, every other things looks pretty good from this angle. Exterior background I believe was done in photoshop.
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thnx... yes i`ve some problems making rugs
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Use the displacement feature of your render to achieve this.
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i used that feature but im not happy with the result, i need to improve in this
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Look for others who have used it and are successful and ask them how.
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Johnn... for the first one..WOWOW... I dont understand nothing, I think is very beautiful, then I read de comment from Pendergeist, you love this kind of guy, if you know, why not to explain for your apreendice. Well..go ahead always, congratulation!
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said that his comments are good because many just tell you it is okay but do not say in which aspects can be improved, and that helps a bit... but the good comments like yours give you encourage to continue.... thanks!
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You're welcome, I know this, cause me too, starting to do some works in photoshop and I loved when people talk whats wrong, you know, we can learn, dont say thanks do another job, hehe...
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for the first scene- thumbs up
next time use less deko and stuff - less is more
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This is your first interior scene? I'm quite impressed. Apart from a few proportional and compositional mistakes, it's quite visually appealing, and even more so for a first attempt.
The first thing I want to comment on is the most easily remedied: color scheme. If you stand back and observe your work, you'll notice that the light-colored furniture in the room clashes horribly with the dark red wall and renders the curtain almost invisible. It also makes the room seem smaller than it is and gives the impression of clutter. I'd suggest a floatier color, perhaps a sandy brown to complement the sofas (and change the curtain to white too), or if you insist on sticking to a dark palette, you could try a light gray or dark blue.
The next obvious things you could address are the out-of-scale items of furniture. First of all, the window is not tall enough. Picture a person sitting in the armchair, then getting up to look out the window. Their head would be almost level with the curtain bar! The shortness of the window also gives an impression of a low ceiling, which further decreases realism.
Thirdly, I want to point out that although the curtains are drawn back, there is no visible rope or string that can be seen to be holding them in place. Also, I notice that the texture on your cushions have been flattened where you stitched it together. This can be fixed by right clicking the material in the right panel and changing the projection type to "Cubic" (adjust length and offset if necessary).
I have many other minor criticisms, including the modelling and texturing especially of your sofas, but to bring them up here at the beginning of a very exciting time for you seems rather petty. I have enjoyed your work immensely, and look forward to your next contribution.
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wow....
thats a good critics and tips!
Well thank u for bring me ur opinion...You are right in all the above and I'll be taking your advice in mind for my next job...
only one thing... maybe my final shot looks too saturated and some colors wrong but this happens when i give a color correction but I'll post another shot with the original colors and I would like you to give a look
Thanks again man!
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You've come a long way since the wip. Everything looks great.
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I'D LOVE TO HAVE THAT ROOM IN MY HOUSE!!
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