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setmyr [2023-04-21 17:03:18 +0000 UTC]
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chasbanner [2021-06-29 10:00:52 +0000 UTC]
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mammothwall [2018-09-09 06:20:17 +0000 UTC]
Are there more stories out there like this that you enjoy too? ones about younger sisters growing? This is a great story! Would LOVE to hear a second part or something else like this too!
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Valor8 [2017-10-17 00:50:57 +0000 UTC]
Please do a sequel!
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jame16 [2017-10-10 01:01:56 +0000 UTC]
This is great, some of the best stuff I've read! I'd love to see a second part.
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Lancealot501 [2016-12-09 16:21:33 +0000 UTC]
Really interesting flashback scene. Its nice to start learning more about Amber and her little sister Jackie. We know that Amber has gone from a B to an E in four years so just imagine where Jackie is at now.
Is the next chapter going to focus on the fair or another flashback?
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jsmith1995 In reply to Lancealot501 [2016-12-09 17:38:59 +0000 UTC]
The next chapter will be back at the fair. Although I am probably going to be reusing the Jackie character sometime, either as a spin-off or just some more one-shot stories later in the future. I like how she's a tom-boy and not so much a girly girl, yet still has a bigger rack than almost any other girl at her school.
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Lancealot501 In reply to jsmith1995 [2016-12-09 18:39:39 +0000 UTC]
Also i think you might have used the wrong word for the school measuring thing. You used breast augmentation which to me means a surgery to enlarge the breasts. So either it was just the wrong word or that school is highly dedicated to 'enhancing' the girls to 'outshine' others in curtain fields.
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jsmith1995 In reply to Lancealot501 [2016-12-09 20:42:21 +0000 UTC]
Yes, I used the wrong word. XD I meant examination.
Thanks for noticing! Fixed.
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