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Cryptassassin [2016-11-27 15:08:45 +0000 UTC]

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Overall this piece is very nice! I love Yveltal and I think this artwork captures his spirit and power wonderfully. I like the way you used perspective to give him a huge, menacing feeling, like he could swoop down and attack you at any moment! I also like your linework and shading, it's very neat and clean. The blue eye is a nice bit of contrast, it stands out against the red and black of the body; that's all done very well. The background is nice, not too sharp as too be distracting but also not too plain as to be boring. It looks like something straight out of the game!
The only thing that I would say needs improvement is the mane; it doesn't look quite like it's flowing and/or fluid. I'm not sure how you would achieve that since I'm not a very talented artist myself, but perhaps with a lighter brush and/or thinner lines, to give it a lighter, more buoyant feel. I also think the legs could be a bit bigger, but I think that's more the design of the Pokemon being awkward than the artwork itself, so it's not a big deal.
You did a great job on this, and it is absolutely going into my favorites. Keep it up!

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Deliderp [2016-11-27 23:25:26 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Yveltal is really hard to to draw (I try to art him too) soo seriously: good job here!! Maybe the head is a little too big comparatively to his body, but this is really good! 

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ThePenguin78 [2016-11-26 20:03:50 +0000 UTC]

Like him more than Xerneas, even if his shiny version is literally bacon

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Absbor-Phamtusin [2016-11-26 19:56:32 +0000 UTC]

It is really awesome.

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DigitalServine2001 [2016-11-26 18:44:47 +0000 UTC]

Death is fluffy :3

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